The Muted Colors of Spring (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Wonderful pastoral images in this. Nature feels no need for any input from us. We have to muddle through on our own.

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Nature knows no emotion. The spring comes, not knowing that the winter of soul has not thawed.

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

Without the visual aid the poem stands on it own....reminding me that no matter how bleak our life seems or how down we may feel...the flowers will still bloom...there is always beauty, if we want to look for it...

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on March 14, 2004

I can feel the warmth of Spring and smell the fragrance of these beautiful flowers. This is wonderful.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 14, 2004

BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN ...RIENDEER

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2004

You've got me in a spring mood now
Thanks...
Have a great night....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Sadly beautiful and symbolic. Lovely write, Retta. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

The Muted Colors Of Your Mind On Paper Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

So sad and so beautiful!
Wonderful writing
Andrea

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

A tragic side to a truly hypnotic poem

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

SAdness to this poem, as if lovelorn, and sring will come to life?

Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

Spring has a way of muting pain. Lovely verses.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

terrific stuff, reindeer; love it! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

wow....very beautiful write!!!

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

wonderful.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

a wonderful sense of spring in this poem ... the spring within us also ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Beautiful write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Oh Reindeer, I'm enchabted by this magical ode to spring! Very beautifully written, a joy to the spirit!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Wonderful poem, Retta.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

spring is nature's way of renewal, beautiful expression of feelings here.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Beautiful write...so soft and soothing...oh spring. :)
Allen

Reviewed by Franz Kessler

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Great picture, wonderful imagery with sentiment and nature woven into each other. Franz

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Love and flowers what a great combination

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

So much romance at the den today. This is great!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

I loved this write ...
You always put ur heart and mind in what you do ...

Sanilunath

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Poem has a stairway of pain and longing through which love wins over...I am particularly impressed by--->
I want to touch your soul,
Take a peek inside,
Wondering if we can ever,
Be that close again < < < <

Debashish

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Spring brings forth life but sometimes we have to bury the past before we can appreciate a new love.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Truly a very beautiful piece Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Reindeer what a wonderful weave of feelings here..
between nature and feelings of love.....I loved
the poem and the wonderful flowers...I am shocked I
was able to respond to you today...I cannot seem
to get to anyones pages...I have tried for hours..
great writing...love...floria
fingers crossed as I click on comments.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

A truly beautiful write and pic. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

Heart touching write Retta. The photo of the wildflowers are gorgeous! I can't wait for Spring! Thank you..Lisa