The Color Of Her Eyes (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

Your words are profound.I really felt them
Excellent work

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 30, 2005

This is haunting. A most beautiful piece!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 25, 2005

Haunting beautiful write.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2005

This was an excellent write ...

SAD I MISSED THIS WRITE ...

Regards
Sanilnath G

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Hauntingly sublime write, Retta. Such depth of vision! Wonderful read.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

The eyes are the windows to the soul...beautiful write...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Hey, that's my old WritingJunkie.net fairie. But I replaced her with Frillie the Dragon because I didn't want the photographer to get me. Somebody's started a rumor that I'm rich, you know? ;-) Loved this poem, Retta. You always have the right writes. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Romantic You!

TRASK

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Oh this mystical, magical beautiful poem leaves me stunned with its brilliance!

I love THE COLOR OF HER EYES!

~ Mari

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Love, love loved this!!! This is the kind of fantasy I like. I hate the kind with a thousand words that it seems the author uses because they think them to be obscure. This is almost like loking at something pretty, yet the personality/attitude of the main character is great, I wanted to say, "You go girl!" The first verse is my fave.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

We all have that fine line..
Excellent, stunning, poetry Retta...

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Hello Reatta, quite a mover here. the eyes don't lie, at least this is what they say. Then I heard of a song called, "Your lying eyes."
on well! G

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Retta,

So soulfully deep; so soulfully perfect ... exceptional verse!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

It is always a pleasure to read your precious words, my friend.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Incredible write Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

Bravo Retta
For this fantastic wrtie
So Well Penned, An excellent piece
"They came to me then
These hapless fools
Thinking I could persuade her
I would not there."
Awesome insight throughout the whole write

William ....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on March 21, 2005

A splendid write, thanks for creating.

Peace and sunshine

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

This is a fantastic write, Reindeer. Your images are vivid and the flow perfection. This is simply a beautiful offering, thank you.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

This stirs the depths, and when we read it...we don't know what we will become.
It is a habit of yours.
Incredible.
John

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

wow..........some write.......
guess she had a haven
and a reason.....excellent........pax A

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Dramatic! Some are indeed content in what we perceive to be their misery, and illusion serves to protect a sensitive soul...

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

I find your writes as enchanting as the graphics and this one did not disappoint.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Such thoughts and expressions in MY hands would be destruction personified. In your mind and pen they give a beautifully written expose of insanity - from the inside looking out. Wonderful write - a good one for each of us to ponder. - Bill

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

So true, how some would rather stay in the mundane of known, than take a positive risk, leading to a meaningful magical life...

To love will someday mean pain. To not love is to never feel or live..

Every positve opportunity one should jump..

Very talented poem..

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

nice place to live huh, but a beauty confined as this, might seem such a waste too, and then to meaningfully dance around her, great write, Al

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

A stunning poem Reindeer! I'm leaning towards
the same conclusions. perhaps insanity is where
its at;-) Exceptional poetry!

etw

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Deeply moving, Retta. And who's to say what "sanity" is. Sounds to me like I'd rather be in her space. Thank you for this soul-stirring offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

A truly haunting and thought provoking write, Reindeer.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Reindeer,

POWERFUL, emotive poetry--stunningly penned!

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 20, 2005

Striking images of a shattered mind.

Ron