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If Dreams Could Become Reality...(For Joseph's Challenge)
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If Dreams Could Become Reality…

(for Joseph’s Challenge)



If I could change dreams into reality,
Then when I die I would return as a wolf,
Powerful and fierce,
Fearing neither man nor beast...

I would run those empty paths,
That man seek,
And find at the end of those long roads,
The end of my dreams...

And he whispered in my ear...
Then I too would be reborn as your life-long mate,
And when you howled at the Hunter's Moon,
I would race to your side,
So you would not be alone...

So I said,
If I could choose how to be reborn,
Then I would be the Eagle,
So aloof and disdainful,
Of those who tread on land,

I would fly into the clouds,
And glide on the warm thermals,
So high that none could see me,
As I passed by...

And he said;

Then I too would change,
Knowing that Eagles mate for life,
And when you grew weary,
I would guide you back to earth,
And cover you with my wings,
So you would not have to hide...

And I whispered,
No...My heart's desire,
Has always been to become the moon,
And I would harbor lovers,
And ease their hearts when they are hard,

I would stare into the eyes of lovers,
And teach their souls to burn,
I would let their song echo in eternity,
And play it back on those warm summer nights,
That lovers desire...

And he held me close,
And said,
My love, then I would be reborn as the sun,
So that we always shared the sky,
And in the end when all becomes one,
You and I would be melded into one being,
And we would share eternity,
Living off the energy of our love...

I could not help but sigh,
And pray for the Gods to hear,
And answer my dream with reality,
For he is my Sun,
And I his moon,
What better wish could there be,
Then to share the sky,
With the one you love?


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 Reviews of "If Dreams Could Become Reality...(For Joseph's Challenge)"
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2005
For he is my Sun,
And I his moon,

poignant lines..
love this ..well done Retta..

vesna..*

Reviewed on August 9, 2005
Very beautiful and inspiring write indeed. Enjoyed this, Retta!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 5, 2005
This is a beautiful dream of an offering well-shared, Reindeer. Thank you! Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2005
Absolutely one of the best romantic poems I have read!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on August 4, 2005
A gorgeous mystical offering!

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
You can always write so beautiful.....

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 3, 2005
truly an outstanding write
thanks for sharing ..Retta
most enjoyable

William ......Peace & Love

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2005
So Beautiful and so true what better way.
I love this really brings peace and comfort to the soul and heart!
Tracey 42xoox

Reviewed on August 1, 2005
Reindeer,

A mystical masterpiece you've penned, richly illustrated and rife with meaning--beautifully done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 1, 2005
This must be the definitive answer to ANY challenge, Retta; it stands alone as a complete response and answer in itself to the purpose-driven life in this sphere or any other - human, natural or supernatural. Complete epitome of true harmony of self with self and with another mutual spirit and with, ultimately, the whole universe. Totally captivating, totally beautiful, totally woven into the fine narrative tapestry which only Retta can. TY so much for this gift and this inner and external beauty that you share with us here. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on August 1, 2005
Wonderful and aglow with a haunting imagery. One of the most impressive poems I've ever read.


Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Dreams Can Be Come REALITY Only If You SACRIFICE For Good Of All Esp. Little Children,i.e. Your Our Days Are Numbered_You Don't Even Have To Get In Line_

There's Little Children Just Beginning...

Romantic Dream Write On Right...

TRASK

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Then to share the sky,
With the one you love?

That's a wonderful dream and transcendant love, God bless your vision
thanks for sharing this wonderful poem

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Dreamily beautiful on poetic fronts of many!!!!


Reviewed by A. Keith Barton
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
A symbiotic love that transcends self; beautifully written; I love the Native American spiritual sense of being at peace with earth, wind, fire and water. I loved the eagles mating for life; I've seen them soar over the canyons northwest of Sedona, Arizona--a beautiful sight to behold with only the wind carrying their graceful beings and blessing the earth below.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Stunning response Retta!!

I couda guess this is what you wanna be!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
You have brought your true spirit to life in this beautiful offering Retta...wonderful response

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Sigh, Reindeer, this is the kind of writing that makes mere mortals sigh aloud. The wolf, a glorious, misunderstood animal... the eagle, protected, yet free... and then the final wish, romantic, and oh, so like you. (smile)

As you weave impact with gentle and quiet with bold, you bring a wondrous tapestry to life. I thank you for calming me and letting me share your thoughts. katy xox

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Reindeer, this is one of the best romantic poems I have read in a long time. If only we all could be the Sun and Moon to love. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
As usual, when you get going, you are a sight to read. Wonderful.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
As always you are so in tune with nature and express the images around you so vividly as to draw the reader into that world.
Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
A truly captivating and quite romantic challenge entry, Reindeer, and I truly enjoyed this.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
A poem for all time! Your words say so much for mortals to ponder. I give this one TWO Tens...since they are inseperable! - Bill

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
This is so warm and romantic, Reindeer and an excellent response to Joseph's challenge. Each of the entries have been so different and each excellent. A wonderful challenge it was, indeed, it touched each of our hearts in a unique way.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
excellent response, Reindeer ... an extremely unique and spiritually romantic poem ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
So sweet and tender Retta
A excelelnt response to the challenge
"I would stare into the eyes of lovers,
And teach their souls to burn,
I would let their song echo in eternity,
And play it back on those warm summer nights,
That lovers desire... "
Peter

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
This poem may be an answer to Joseph challenge but it has inspired one of your best writes. This is truly a gem.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Reindeer,

You are so in tune with yourself and with nature.

"For he is my Sun,
And I his moon"

This poem is such a lovely response to the challenge and I thank you!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Warm fireside write.
Excellent last stanza.

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Nice feeling of love and affection ... Sun man and female moon ...Excellent concept of love ...




Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
Reviewed on July 31, 2005
Oh RD...
This is so lovely. What a beautiful concept.
This poem is so perfect. Perfectly penned.
I truly enjoyed this writing.
Thank you.

Love,
Bonnie


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