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If Dreams Could Become Reality…
(for Joseph’s Challenge)
If I could change dreams into reality,
Then when I die I would return as a wolf,
Powerful and fierce,
Fearing neither man nor beast...
I would run those empty paths,
That man seek,
And find at the end of those long roads,
The end of my dreams...
And he whispered in my ear...
Then I too would be reborn as your life-long mate,
And when you howled at the Hunter's Moon,
I would race to your side,
So you would not be alone...
So I said,
If I could choose how to be reborn,
Then I would be the Eagle,
So aloof and disdainful,
Of those who tread on land,
I would fly into the clouds,
And glide on the warm thermals,
So high that none could see me,
As I passed by...
And he said;
Then I too would change,
Knowing that Eagles mate for life,
And when you grew weary,
I would guide you back to earth,
And cover you with my wings,
So you would not have to hide...
And I whispered,
No...My heart's desire,
Has always been to become the moon,
And I would harbor lovers,
And ease their hearts when they are hard,
I would stare into the eyes of lovers,
And teach their souls to burn,
I would let their song echo in eternity,
And play it back on those warm summer nights,
That lovers desire...
And he held me close,
And said,
My love, then I would be reborn as the sun,
So that we always shared the sky,
And in the end when all becomes one,
You and I would be melded into one being,
And we would share eternity,
Living off the energy of our love...
I could not help but sigh,
And pray for the Gods to hear,
And answer my dream with reality,
For he is my Sun,
And I his moon,
What better wish could there be,
Then to share the sky,
With the one you love?
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And I his moon,
poignant lines..
love this ..well done Retta..
vesna..*
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Regis
Peace, Carole
thanks for sharing ..Retta
most enjoyable
William ......Peace & Love
I love this really brings peace and comfort to the soul and heart!
Tracey 42xoox
A mystical masterpiece you've penned, richly illustrated and rife with meaning--beautifully done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
There's Little Children Just Beginning...
Romantic Dream Write On Right...
TRASK
With the one you love?
That's a wonderful dream and transcendant love, God bless your vision
thanks for sharing this wonderful poem
I couda guess this is what you wanna be!!
Love Tinka
Paul;-)
As you weave impact with gentle and quiet with bold, you bring a wondrous tapestry to life. I thank you for calming me and letting me share your thoughts. katy xox
Felix
Take care,
Sherry
A excelelnt response to the challenge
"I would stare into the eyes of lovers,
And teach their souls to burn,
I would let their song echo in eternity,
And play it back on those warm summer nights,
That lovers desire... "
Peter
You are so in tune with yourself and with nature.
"For he is my Sun,
And I his moon"
This poem is such a lovely response to the challenge and I thank you!
Love & Light,
Joseph
Excellent last stanza.
This is so lovely. What a beautiful concept.
This poem is so perfect. Perfectly penned.
I truly enjoyed this writing.
Thank you.
Love,
Bonnie