Choices (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 23, 2003

geez - Spiders I can tolerate, mice and rats NEVER

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

yuk!!!! I hate spiders...shivers down my spine....gggggrrr!!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

I like this. It says so many things out of one idea you had. Teresa

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Great write, I usually put all the creepy crawlies out the door!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Reindeer what an excellent metaphor..we all are faced with similar choices you handled it well...excellent write

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Retta, Very compassionate. I would have crushed him. I hate spiders. Arachnaphobia.

Reviewed by Chris Jabon

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Guess these people don't realize this excellent poem is about choices and the consequences of them do they? Excellent poem Rein, You have a way so teaching through your poetry that I love...glad to see you here...

Chris

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Captivating! Spiders always have my undivided attention when I spy them!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Hi Retta, I am glad he is still alive. There helpful you know.

love yf
tony

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

I hope you had a lovely Easter. I am sorry I am not being as supportive as I should be. In fact it may be some time before you may hear from me. Hopefully one day I may return to AD. At the moment I am still searching for peace and quiet so essential to writing. Your friend Victor

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Hi Reindeer,
LOL...This gave me a good laugh...
I pictured the entire
scene...

Great write

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Jacqueline VanZandbeek (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

I seem to have the luck of finding spiders while I am in the shower. sheeesh! Excellent imagery here, I enjoyed the read. It gave me shivers!
Jacqueline

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Very well written...I loathe them brrrrrr!.. give me a snake anyday......Still they have their place :).....Thanks, Dani

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

Retta,
Bravo! Very insightful indeed!
Rodney

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

I always turn the damn things out of doors,
they help catch those bloodsuckers.

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on April 21, 2003

hhhhhmmmm...I was right there with him..