Troubled Spirits... (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Oh Reindeer, what ever you're doing, please keep on doing it! Your poetry is awesome. This one sent chills up my spine!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Stunningly atmospheric..

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

(((reindeer)))

WOW

what can i say...WOW

awesome!

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

A fine walk with you, Retta. I love you nature imagery. Bravo.

Reviewed by Steve Joos

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

A very eerie piece, with sharp imagery. One almost hears a western bird of prey screaming in the night

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Reindeer, this is a wonderful poem

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

A haunting beautiful piece!

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Hi Reindeer,
What an outstanding write...
Yet another one of
your masterpieces...

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

masterful write, reindeer; well done, sweetie! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

excellent piece ....Reindeer

William

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Very nice Retta!
Jack

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Excellent and very chilling. I love this, Reindeer
Chrissie

Reviewed by Cynthia Pagliolo (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

A beautiful piece that flowed so well that I was right there watching this person. Well done!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Reindeer,
haunting and mesmerizing piece the imageery is so excellent.
"My spirits and I,
Running one last time,
They carry me up and we fly
Falling into the ebony sky… "
Love Peg

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Good Morning, Retta
Outstanding!!

tony

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Retta, this is outstanding and wild. Very dark and bone chilling.

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

love the rhythm..

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Rhetta this dark, foreboding, haunting and yet full of the chills of truth! EXCELLANT WRITE!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Have you been smoking that pipe or chewing that Peyote again?