Tony's 16 Word Challenge (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

excellent work Retta!!

Reviewed by Nicole Lasher

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

A very good account of a lesson learned. Good work :)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

You are one creative soul possessing the eye for beauty and the hand to transpose it to paper.
Amor

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Wish I could do that. Outstanding

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Reindeer,
You met the challenge brilliantly well with this excellent poem.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

{{{Retta}}}
your creativity is realy something wonderful!!

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Dang! You're sooo good!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

i'm glad you can see beyond the veil... great write!

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

excellent work......

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

5-23-03

And_ Curiosity Killed The Cat!

TRASK

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Retta,
Good job, very good write!..Seeking to graze, marvelous line, so graceful the flow
Peace sister
Rodney

Seeking to graze upon my peace,
And lifted the blanket of ignorance,
From my naïve eyes

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Excellent writing! Bravo!
Love the way you close each stanza.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Wow! This is superb Reindeer, great answer to challenge and message of wisdom
besides;-)!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Hey Reindeer this is excellent work I love the wat you wove the 16 words.
Smiles
Peggy

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

great stuff!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Excellent response to Tony's challenge!

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Dear Retta, I am honored. It was never a challenge. It was an assignment. But you did it beautifully!!

tony

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Rhetta this is great great GREAT! I think you have really stepped up and shined to Tony's challenge!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

You did it again. Bravo.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Retta, I tell ya,,I looked at those words for three days and absolutely 'nothing' that even came close to looking like a poem came to my mind.
But I see that you stepped up and met this challenge with exceptional pride. Beautifully written! Lisa

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Tony found your poem somewhere and picked out 16 words, right? Just kidding, Retta. Great job.
Leland

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

wise is one who recognizes they have grown...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

great write Reindeer

William

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on May 23, 2003

Wonderful work...I'd say you met this challenge exceptionally!!!!