Harboring Love... (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 31, 2003

Another excellent write from you!

Reviewed on May 31, 2003

Retta, a wonderful write. I am at the grandparent stage at present and loving it. Love has a way of sneaking in without you noticing...one day it is just thre ;-)~Trish~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 31, 2003

I love reading your stuff, always a pleasure.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 31, 2003

deep... emotionally powerful...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Reindeer, you write with such honesty and grace, your words are always exceptional and meaningful, you have a rare gift!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Powerful and sad. Great write.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Romance abounds here in the den.. you have written something very human, identifiable and so honest. Who could not relate to this? I loved the line with "broken lips".. really great line! Wonderfully expressive work. katy.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

5-30-03

This' Great_It's Why we Keep Looking! Why Is . Store This AM; Always The Chick Who Hits On You You Don't Want To Meet!

TRASK

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

another excellent write ....Reindeer
I loved it

William

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Such frustration...and such longing....
{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Sandi Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

I can truely feel your emotion. Great ending. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Very well written Retta, I love the last line too.

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Retta,
when real, deep, spiritual, meaningful love is realy ready to find you it will track you down like a cruise missle..

Love,
Dove ~

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Retta,
Lovely piece....
Indeed is love blind I say!
Rodney

Is love going to always be so blind?
Will it never see me here?
I�ve been waiting for a while,
And timidly hold out my hand,
But not to just any man,
To one who is noble and true,
Why doesn�t it hear me calling?
Where the hell are you?

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

You ensnared me in this piece, Reindeer. Beautiful, heartfelt words.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

You really dazzled me with this one and I loved your design! You had me right where you wanted, like a fish on the hook! A very well crafted piece, excellent writes!

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

"But not to just any man,
To one who is noble and true,"

And herein lies our problem, sweetie. Our standards are just too high. <wink>

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Yes I agree with this
Where the hell are you?

This tops the cake!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Sanilnath

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

This was indeed so beautiful.
Read each and every line with lot care.
Wonderful... Superb...
You have made this write so strong and powerful.
Indeed beautiful

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Love that last line. Well done, Retta.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

A picture perfect life.

May Lu, a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Michael Kersting

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

A great write..keep it up ...and thanks for your review.

Reviewed by Candida Eittreim

Reviewed on May 30, 2003

Truly excellent and poignant description of hurt and that tiny glimmer of hope.. Hugs Retta!

Candy