The Burning... (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2003

The words played the scene as if I was watching...

Great job

Mister

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

ohhhhh you gave me chills

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

You, my dear, are a writer!!!! Bravo!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

6-11-03
Excellent_ You Can Be Deleted Burned While You Write!

TRASK

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

powerful and intriguing write, reindeer; well done! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

(((reindeer)))

"...i hear them whispering
as though i cannot hear
as though i am not dead
as though i am alive...

and i wonder then if this is true
why are you looking at me
like you can't bear to see
the creature that is me"

(((HUGS)))

powerful, emotional, heartwrending, vivid write...i could feel the pain in this

well done--i'm saving this one to my library

love,

karla. *tears*

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

Awesome imagery

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

Wonderful write, very real!

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

"Numb to all but pain"...what horror you describe. As always, without flaw.

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on June 11, 2003

This was powerful on a variety of levels...Excellent!