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The Web of Life
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I lay as one trapped,
Spun in the web,
I could not refuse to make…
Lost in a World,
Where only death was real,
And all else,
Illusion…

The sound you hear,
Is my world,
Shattering-
Listen!
The pieces are laughing,
As they hit the ground…

God,
Come to me beloved,
For I am tainted,
By the world’s stain,
And need you,
To wash me clean again…

Ah beloved,
You alone can help me forget,
The gentle soul,
Buried in my dreams…

Perhaps you were right,
When you whispered in my ear;

“My love,
We are but clay,
Shaped and baked,
Another’s creation-
Brought to life,
By a God’s shallow kiss…”

This web of life,
Tightens about my neck
Like a noose,
And I watch Death smile,
As he comes to kick the chair
From beneath my feet…


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 Reviews of "The Web of Life"
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Reminiscent of the works of Rumi in places, bone-chilling in others.

Superb craftsmanship,dear.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2003
Retta, the power in your words is so outstanding. Bill

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
I would have to agree with all your fans, pretty lady. In a word, excellent.
Peace,
Cherokee

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
fantastic! but i think only your body will fall...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
So strong, love it...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Reindeer, the strength of your words always effects me;-) You are a treasure!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
...the yearning ..the longing...screams...but alas it is not to be....I love your poetry...one cannot leave your site and not transmute all...well done...your mind & soul intrigue me...

Excellent..

Vesna

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Powerful imagery, here..!!!! LOVED EVERY LINE..!!

Love,
Dove

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Magnifique. Excellent writing.

Reviewed by Steve Joos
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Some of the imagery and description is shattering. Well done.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Ditto!!

Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Retta, this a beautiful write. Nice to read you again. ~Trish~

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Retta, well done. Talk about getting kicked while your down.

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Dear Retta, I think I have run out of superlatives, so I will just say write soon, please!!


tony:)

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Wonderful write ....

“My love,
We are but clay,
Shaped and baked,
Another’s creation-
Brought to life,
By a God’s shallow kiss…”

Excellent Friend

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Retta, you do good work...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2003
Oh the beautiful, raw longing in this!


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