Retta!! I love this! And the title, I was swooning just from the sense it gave me, but even better is coming outside to see you dance and laugh and play in Mother Storm!! This is my favorite of yours, it rocks, and pounds, it exudes wildness and devil-may-care attitude, it is the storm of Life brought to to the blank page with understanding and elan! Bravo! :)
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
I adored this. One day...think I am going to have a "storm child"....You know ...think it was Freud that said if you are scared of a t storm ....go make lov in it!...lol Serious, I am breathless.... I love how it sizzles on my skin....Very well done :)
Thanks,
Teresa
Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Such power in your pen to draw us to think..!!!Thank you Reindeer..
Reindeer I'm breathless with the excitement I feel from this exquisite poem, as if the electricity of it touched me too! This goes to the top of the list! Amazing emotions captured in this one!
This blew me away! How good is this?! (*That's rhetorical*) How so deeply touching. Really tugs at the heart and pulls strings I never knew were there. Wow.. this is GREAT> Absolutely fantastic. I'm off to read it AGAIN.
Dear Stormchild: You capture the love of wild storminess that only some children feel, that draws them to venture into the deluge among paths of massive electric charges, unaware or uncaring that randomness occasionally means right here.
A terrific ode to that spirit. Salud.
Leland
Through all the hours I've spent here at Authros Den I've never enjoyed more the maturity of creativity in verse as I have yours. Well done.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
A are a storm child. I can tell from your poems.
That was excellent.
Love
S
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
This took my breath away, what a write!
Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
"When I rip off the burdens of my life
And run to dance in the rain."
We much all have our own fullfillments as we all have our own dreams seperate and apart from all others and we should never try to hold each other down
This is great
Mister
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
storm.
~Nikki~
this is GORGEOUS--breathtakingly beautiful, you've captured the intensity and beauty of the storm so vividly
*applause* savin this one to my library--one of your best
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
I adored this. One day...think I am going to have a "storm child"....You know ...think it was Freud that said if you are scared of a t storm ....go make lov in it!...lol Serious, I am breathless.... I love how it sizzles on my skin....Very well done :)
Thanks,
Teresa
Love,
Dove
enjoyed reading
William
I loved it
Excellent _
Fighter Tis Writer...
TRASK
Warm Love
*Brittany Renee*
A terrific ode to that spirit. Salud.
Leland
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love,
Susan
That was excellent.
Love
S
And run to dance in the rain."
We much all have our own fullfillments as we all have our own dreams seperate and apart from all others and we should never try to hold each other down
This is great
Mister