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Storm Child
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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Clouds gather, rumble ominously,

And inside I feel restless and hot-

My skin burning, my mouth dry,

And lightning flashes in the sky…

The wind gathers and with a mighty roar

Flings open the hard wood door-

Banging it back against the wall like a knock

And the crack of lightning sends a shock,

Of electricity running through my veins-


I step forward not heeding the warning

Of those who claim to love me...

Yet would see me tied to this house of stone

Instead of dancing in the rain alone…

I feel the tiniest rain drops blown in by the wind,

And I am lost as they sizzle when they land on my skin…

So hot I burn them dry,

And lightning cracks in the too dark sky-

And beckons with a glowing finger

Pointing out the way it needs me to go-

And like a child of the elements I run

And find myself amidst the storm…


My feet touching the damp earth

Feeling the rain pour down my back

I lift my arms to the sky

And open my mouth wide

Trying to drink it dry...

The storm laughs at my foolish youth

Plays a song only I can hear...

The drums of the earth beat out their tune

As the lightning cracks in the sky

My soul screams out…dance or die!

My feet forget to touch at all

And I am lifted up and carried off into the sky...


We dance the storm and I

With nature’s fury playing the tune,

And the dark clouds rumbling with satisfaction,

that there is one who can feel such glory!


The rain pours through me

And drains out my soul

Am I the child you use to know?

Have I changed so much?

Sorry my love.

But when the sky calls my name

I feel no shame.

When I rip off the burdens of my life

And run to dance in the rain.

Nothing can stop me,

The power of the storm is stronger

Than my will,

Stronger than even your love for me,

For its not your name I hear

When the lightning screams out its rage,

And the rain pours down to the earth…

Ah, my beloved, my sweet love,

You cannot hold me to your earth-

You will never stop the Storm Child

From dancing in the rain…

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 Reviews of "Storm Child"
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
Wow...what other word is there to describe such an electrical
storm.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
Excellant and Splendid Work Rhetta! This was always one of my favs...Ahhhhhh to be one, alone with the rain!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
phew, I feel spent! What a powerful poem.

Reviewed on June 28, 2003
(((o, reindeer)))

this is GORGEOUS--breathtakingly beautiful, you've captured the intensity and beauty of the storm so vividly

*applause* savin this one to my library--one of your best

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed on June 28, 2003
fantastic write and imagery, reindeer; well done! :( (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
Outstanding! The power of storms.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
Such power in this one...splendid Retta!!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on June 28, 2003
Gem of a write...BHUWAN

Reviewed on June 28, 2003
You go girl....exceptional write.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Retta!! I love this! And the title, I was swooning just from the sense it gave me, but even better is coming outside to see you dance and laugh and play in Mother Storm!! This is my favorite of yours, it rocks, and pounds, it exudes wildness and devil-may-care attitude, it is the storm of Life brought to to the blank page with understanding and elan! Bravo! :)

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003

I adored this. One day...think I am going to have a "storm child"....You know ...think it was Freud that said if you are scared of a t storm ....go make lov in it!...lol Serious, I am breathless.... I love how it sizzles on my skin....Very well done :)

Thanks,

Teresa

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Such power in your pen to draw us to think..!!!Thank you Reindeer..

Love,
Dove

Reviewed on June 27, 2003
very moving. very entertaining, very very, everything. G

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
a beautiful write reindeer
enjoyed reading

William

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Excellent Write Retta,
I loved it

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Wow! This poem is electrical magic! So unusual and amazing!

Reviewed by Lynn Barry
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
I believe you free a lot of people with your poetic style and messages...and enlighten all others...very nice...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Reindeer I'm breathless with the excitement I feel from this exquisite poem, as if the electricity of it touched me too! This goes to the top of the list! Amazing emotions captured in this one!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
6-27-03

Excellent _

Fighter Tis Writer...

TRASK


Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
This blew me away! How good is this?! (*That's rhetorical*) How so deeply touching. Really tugs at the heart and pulls strings I never knew were there. Wow.. this is GREAT> Absolutely fantastic. I'm off to read it AGAIN.

Warm Love
*Brittany Renee*

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Dear Stormchild: You capture the love of wild storminess that only some children feel, that draws them to venture into the deluge among paths of massive electric charges, unaware or uncaring that randomness occasionally means right here.
A terrific ode to that spirit. Salud.
Leland

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Very strong, thoughtful write, Retta.

Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Wonderful write of feelings! Excellent expression!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
Through all the hours I've spent here at Authros Den I've never enjoyed more the maturity of creativity in verse as I have yours. Well done.

Love,
Susan

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
A are a storm child. I can tell from your poems.
That was excellent.
Love
S

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
This took my breath away, what a write!

Reviewed by Debra Stiles, The Original Mister (Reader)
Reviewed on June 27, 2003
"When I rip off the burdens of my life
And run to dance in the rain."
We much all have our own fullfillments as we all have our own dreams seperate and apart from all others and we should never try to hold each other down
This is great
Mister


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