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In An Evergreen Forest
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie → (All Poetry by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie)
  
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A Challenge Poem at Fireside, to use the following words in a poem:

Shamed, ignore, shining, recluse, petulant, misplaced, tawdry, uncaring, match, evergreen, trust, silken, froth, music, painting, malevolent



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In An Evergreen Forest



I sit on my mountain,
On top of the world,
In an evergreen forest,
Haunted by a dark moon,
Looking down on the tawdry city below,
Uncaring and malevolent-
Ignore the lies that pour from its silken lips,
Its hate no match for my own,
My eyes shining like the sun in Van Gogh’s painting…

Froth pouring from the lips of man,
Spouting words I have learned not to trust,
Sweet music I refuse to hear,
Like a petulant child,
I turn away,
And close my ears…

I am not shamed for shutting out,
The lies it sings so proudly,
Misplaced pride of man,
Ruining the glory of love,
Thinking they shall laugh in its face,
Only to discover they have fallen from grace,
Now lay in rotting sewers,
Nothing was worthy enough to save…

Shall never regret leaving that place below,
I live as a recluse in this lovely place,
Where time moves so slow,
Watching as your world disappears without a trace…

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 Reviews of "In An Evergreen Forest"
Reviewed by Jerry Andrews (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
You did well with your word supply, Rhetta, and told a story that's far too true in many places. Jerry

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2003
This took my breath away. Your words ARE quite excellent. I love images like this.

Thank you,
Emilie

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Fantastic Retta
Loved the last paragraph !
S

Reviewed by Tony Nerone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Outstanding as always, Rein.

tony:)

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Well done. Your imagery of the 'green' reminds me of home. Glad to see another who knows its beauty.

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Whoa! Hard words to use together but GOOD job in it, Reindeer!

-brittany-

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Lovely poem, you more than met the challenge!

Reviewed on August 2, 2003
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :0 (mouth agape as I read this incredible write!) Outstanding job, Reindeer; enjoyed so much! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
You exceeded the challenge Reindeer ... this is marvelous!

~Joseph

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Excellent write Reindeer
loved it enjoyed much

William

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
A challenge you met head on and surpassed

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Outstanding, Reindeer. An excellent use of words.
Love
~Chrissie

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
As stunning as ever....You made excellent use of the words. Write on...Dani

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Haunting and well done!

Reviewed on August 2, 2003
I love this, Reindeer! excellent...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
A Beautiful piece! Great!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
A masterpiece Retta!!

love
Tinka

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
Reviewed on August 2, 2003
Another great poem Reindeer, deep, I don't like cities either though I don't live in the wild. I love trees, I would hate to live in a place with no trees. Jackie <> <

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Beautiful write Retta! ~Z~

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
You've done marvelous with this.....

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
Excellent use of all the words, Reindeer...
Hugs
Jenni


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