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Creation
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*Dark Poetry*



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In a place without honor and everlasting sin,
We created a world to live in,
You and I...
Where you sought to give me a reason,
To stop wanting to die.

Dark Knight and his Red Queen...
Living a life few have ever seen,
He walks through the world like a king-
This gladiator who fights his battles in the ring...

And I,
I merely hold the crown...

I wish I could have realized,
Before it was all said and done,
The thing we gave birth to,
Would also be Your Son...

I Tried!
I tried to shape him,
I tried to mold him to my soul,
Dear God,
How was I too know-
The Evil in you would show...
Would manifest itself in everything you touched,
Even me-

Why couldn't I see...

His beauty would be fleeting,
His wholeness uncentered-
His soul cracked and bleeding,
Your black blood flowing in his veins...
I should have remembered,
In hell it never rains-

There would be no way to wash him clean,
Rinse the blood from his hands,
Find a pool of clear, clean water,
Baptize him...Save him from his father!

This child with an evil grin,
Smiles at me...Stares at him-
Has my heart, but his Daddy's soul,
I wish I had known,
What it was I was thinking,
When I dared to give birth...
Gave you progeny,
To spread among the Earth...



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 Reviews of "Creation"
Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Yes, memorable writing. "In Hell it never rains" is a gem. Unsettling poem. I
hope it is not autobiographical.

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2003
Outstanding work, and awesome truly awesome dark poetry...now can you please help me chase these goose pimleys away??? :O)
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1
Reviewed on September 16, 2003
WoW - my skin is tingling!
Outstanding writing!
....
I should have remembered,
In hell it never rains-


Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Such a chilling write.

Nancy

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
The depth you must have had to reach for this is heart wrenching. (((((Reindeer)))))

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Ah, Reindeer, you're a master of this genre! You make one feel your pain and fear. Well done, well done!!!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Oh what creation grows, from the devil's seed.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Deep chilling write.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Reindeer....oh so powerful and deep this is...I must go read it again..I think I might not have taken it all in with the first read...this is one to read slowly and savor...great write...floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Reindeer, you stunned me,I'm speechless with this one!It reeks with the stench of stygian places while it is so beautifully written.Such a dichotomy;-)Superb!

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
One never knows the complete results of anything. Thought-provoking!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
This gave me chills! Powerful write, Retta.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Yowsa! What a powerful write! Deep in thoughts and meaning and touching. Outstanding job!

Tami

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
DANG!!! This hits home BIG TIME!!
Like father like son!!

Tried!
I tried to shape him,
I tried to mold him to my soul,
Dear God,
How was I too know-
The Evil in you would show...
Would manifest itself in everything you touched,
Even me-

This really made me sad!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Stunning! Hugs!

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
This is chilling...but very well composed and holding a dark message.....

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
WOW! This is oooooooooooooooh...um chilling. You rock the house with this! Your voice and creative little pen----thank you for treating us today!

Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2003
Wow!


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