Childish Dreams (poem) by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Reindeer, ya done good

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

You have mastered this challenge well, Retta. Beautiful work.
Amor

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

crude and awkward..not at all indicative of the nature of this poem...powerful work, poet.

Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell

Reviewed on October 27, 2003

Wonderful use of the challenge words
beautiful poem ... :)

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Outstanding challenge write. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

You never disappoint me, Reindeer. Excellent work!

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Great result for the challenge Reindeer.

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

(((((Rein))))) You have captured the essence of the heart torn by love. I felt your words keenly. Beautifully written, my friend!!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Wonderful use of the words. You have done an excellent job. Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Exceptional write Reindeer! You do this genre with such expertise!
Challenge met and surpassed!;-)

Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Touching and sad write.
You did a great job Retta.
S

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Love does come again, Reindeer, when you're not looking! You write this with such expression, I can feel it, but that may be because I've been in that place. Excellent.... stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Super job Reindeer. This is most enjoyable.

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

time does not heal all wounds, but a new love can... keep your heart open. Don't fail to see it when it comes your way..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

In this frozen world of false hope

Powerful words; powerful poem.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

A very good challenge of words you did this one excellent.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Great write Retta!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Challege met! Outstanding poem...~Z~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

You met the challenge and conquered it in what has become your fine style and grace. A heart-rendering, sad poem of self-awareness. Fine job.