I am the shadow,
That haunts your mind,
The whisper that you hear
Borne to you on the wind,
The shade of love,
You dare not reveal,
The secret you keep in your heart...
Raised in another time,
When the earth sang songs
And the people danced
To her lovely beat,
As she turned…
I am from;
The Forest of the Moon,
Where shadows lay,
Even at noon,
Haunting and frightening,
But never to me,
They were my friends you see,
And hid me from all of you,
With no words to tell you the truth
Of what you want to hear,
I sit silent and mute,
But hear everything,
See all you do not want to believe,
I stand alone at the edge of time
And stare into my doom,
But I do not weep,
Nor do I smile,
I simply wait here for a while,
For my true love to call my name,
And life will begin again...
I am,
A child of the forest,
Raised by the lovely trees,
Fed on their stories,
They whispered in the early morning breeze,
Listened to the wild flowers,
Who taught me to smile,
And the creatures of the forest,
Who taught me life could be worth while…
I am the secret you keep in your heart,
The one you reveal to no one,
The one that tears your life apart-
The child inside that you keep safe and whole,
The one you let no body know…
I am,
The writer of words,
And stories and songs,
The ones that you once heard,
In your dreams at night,
But now no longer listen…
I am a native of the Land,
Who hears the earth speak,
And write its echoes upon the printed page,
A blind woman who hears the eagles scream,
And the moon cry…
Very nice. It is easy for the reader to empathize with the thoughts conveyed by the words.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2003
You are all you should be......A wonderfully talented soul.....with a heart as big as Australia.....ty, Dani
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2003
Why didn't you just say "I AM A FIGHTER--BRING IT ON because I can take it and show you where you can put your angst and hardships" Woman--you rock and leave me in awe! You are a gifted soul.
No doubt on that ..
You are Reindeer.
Its Proud to say ..
You are Reindeer.
Excellent way to express yourself ...
Excellent write and great ....
Thanks for this cute write ...
Huggs
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
I am…
Reindeer.
YOU are an ANGEL!!!
This piece was remarkable..glorious in its wisdom ..ty sooo much!
Vesna
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on November 22, 2003
Reindeer, as ever, you express your singular uniqueness in such a calm and artistic way that it just draws the reader in...! A wonderful portrait of a modern warrior-woman and artist! Thanks for the peek into your mind and soul!
beautiful write, just like you, reindeer; enjoyed reading this gentle poem about yourself! a fine response to michael curry's challenge; BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D love you, reindeer!
Yes, Reindeer, you are all that nature holds. Just a lovely accounting. Thanks for sharing yourself with the rest of us. Enjoyed. Lisa
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
Excellent ending to a very heart felt write and introduction to who you are. Thank you for the sharing and great addition to the challenge.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2003
"I am,
A child of the forest,
Raised by the lovely trees,
Fed on their stories,
They whispered in the early morning breeze,
Listened to the wild flowers,
Who taught me to smile,
And the creatures of the forest,
Who taught me life could be worth while… "
Reindeer....MAGNIFICENT....touching my heart....floria
Five years have passed. The sequel to the award-winning Chapel of Eternal Love, this book revisits the same couples in the first book, and where the lives have taken them since they left the altar at The Chapel of Eternal Love
Deputy Dave Jenkins investigates the murder of local high school principal, Jerry Egge, but this is a multi-faceted novel that deals with spiritualism, romance, friendship, and children who fall through the cracks.
"Murder isn't usually this
Thank You,
Emilie
Bravo!!!!
This is truly outstanding.
Trixie :)
No doubt on that ..
You are Reindeer.
Its Proud to say ..
You are Reindeer.
Excellent way to express yourself ...
Excellent write and great ....
Thanks for this cute write ...
Huggs
Reindeer.
YOU are an ANGEL!!!
This piece was remarkable..glorious in its wisdom ..ty sooo much!
Vesna
Carmen
Truly poetic.
Gina
I am thankful for what you are.
~Chrissie
Love Tinka
Blessings,
Libby
A child of the forest,
Raised by the lovely trees,
Fed on their stories,
They whispered in the early morning breeze,
Listened to the wild flowers,
Who taught me to smile,
And the creatures of the forest,
Who taught me life could be worth while… "
Reindeer....MAGNIFICENT....touching my heart....floria