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All Over Again
by Sara Carlson → (All Poetry by Sara Carlson)
  
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Starting all over. Back to square one.
This was all over before it'd begun.
I'm longing to hold you, but you just pull away.
You won't even listen to what I need to say.
People will judge and that's not your fault.
But why must this make things come to a halt?
I see how you follow the ones that you love.
How their words mean more than heaven above
But look beyond words and take this one chance
On a girl who sees what could be romance.
This girl’s not alone in all that she sees
Everyone knows that you hold the keys
I’m not just talking of friends and such
I’m speaking to you who felt so much.
How can you say you feel for me so
Then the very next day just let me go?
So I sit here confused and alone in my world
With butterfly wings that never unfurled.
For the wings that were meant to carry me away
We’re ripped off my back and left on the way.
A tension so thick it could choke out life.
The pain and the silence cut like a knife.
I’ve been tossed aside because of words that were said
They weren’t even mine! I feel so misled.
Friends for now, who knows what will be?
I know exactly, It’ll NEVER be me
To now be just friends I don't know if I can
But despite all this pain I’d do it again.


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 Reviews of "All Over Again"
Reviewed by Missy
Reviewed on October 7, 2002
Hey Sara! You are so awesome at poems.. Keep em goin...well cya girl!! xoxox I love yaz!

Reviewed by a a (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
For whoever that was written about, must feel pretty scared now. Great write.

Reviewed by Dre
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
This is my favorite or your poems. You are really talented. I think that you should write a book and have it published. Can I be your publicist?

Reviewed by Jackie
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
hey Sara- awesome poem. Your so good at this stuff. I hope you kep writing ur doin' great!

Reviewed by Courtnie
Reviewed on October 6, 2002
i really liked the poem, you kinda got off track in the middle but came through in the end (i do the same exact thing) also first you refer to yourself as she and then its 'I' i dont know if that was supposed to be that way or what lol but yeah i just noticed that....but an awesome poem

*~*Courtnie*~*

Reviewed by Ashley
Reviewed on October 5, 2002
Hey sara thats a awesome poem...that so works....he needs to read this is get common sense...peace

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 5, 2002
Very Good write....


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