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Memory
by Sara Carlson → (All Poetry by Sara Carlson)
  
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~Yeah....I'm Sorry...~

It’s distant and so far away

an unknown star, maybe the sun’s rays

stretched thin across a million miles

it lives somewhere with angel’s smiles

the faint whispers of a heartbeat

sugar gone sour, nevermore sweet

and I’m lost to the words that fly

befuddle and confuse my useless mind

dancing on flowers

watching the hours

as they trickle by

nothing but history

just a memory

but I don’t know why

For now it’s crushed and forgotten fantasy,

you were all I knew, now I can’t see,

how easy to crush the fragile and the fair,

what’s gone is lost, nevermore there,

how dangerous a star dangles from string,

Is my heart in your hand,

because you can’t see,

A hot dancing flame has the power to burn,

just as your eyes have the heart to hurt


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 Reviews of "Memory"
Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on March 2, 2005
Just as your eyes have the heart to hurt... well done.

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
softly captured and nicely worded... the realisation that things will never be the same

the cold fact: there's no turning back

Reviewed by Christine Morell
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Excellent ...
Chrissie

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Vewry nice write.
Peg

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
"A hot dancing flame has the power to burn,
just as your eyes have the heart to hurt"... excellent images to this painfully dear write...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
Nicely done....

Reviewed by B Thomas Daniels (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2003
so lovely yet painful

Well expressed

Tom


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