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Crawling
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yet another cinquain


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This shell--
hard, dry-- still a
crack, one crack, enough to
pry, reach, claw through. The hermit  crawls
weeping...

 

 

 

 

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 Reviews of "Crawling"
Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on October 10, 2006
this is like a seeding comeing to life.....
I see this as positive, and uplifting
perhaps after over coming a heart break
pax A

Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka
Reviewed on October 4, 2006
Beautiful heart-wrenching metaphor.

Reviewed on October 3, 2006
It only takes one crack to enable a shaft of sunlight to pierce through. Still, even then we simply try and avert our eyes rather than take the chance to use the light to guide us out of darkness. I have these dreams where I try and run but cant but instead have to crawl on all fours - never know where I am running to or what or who it is I am running from. Maybe the action takes place in an empty shell.
Weeping can often be balm for a troubled soul.
I hope you don't mind a bit of open self - indulgence, Micha, but as ever, your work finds resonance with my psyche.


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