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Words Strung , Aching and Patsy Cline
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rambling, writing whatever comes out, with Patsy Cline singing back in there, somewhere...
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Half drunk,
words playing
ping-pong
inside my aching head,
but aching ain't uncommon,
no

Half drunk
back of my mind
Patsy Cline
singing
"Crazy"
Damn, nobody, nobody
can sing that song
like her, like Patsy Cline

And she's been
roaming my aches,
singing my mind
inside my heart,
my ache

Inside,
time
too fast
can't, today, can't
seem to find the words
roving through-- driving my hell
to the backseat for a minute here
and there...
see?

Still,
it's her
and that woman,
that song
can move one
make a lost time
almost wind-up and stare
through stained glass, unbroken,
when she starts again,
Patsy Cline...

Damn, I ought
to feel lucky
hearing that woman
mean something more
than even music can define,
when she sings
"Crazy"--
Inside,
see?

Thoughts wandering
but not without
one more lost,
strong, singing so fine
dreamt lady song bird,
weaving through the lost words
roaming through my mind.

And that can't be
all bad, no that can't be
all that bad at all

When I hear it,
hear her
call  



 

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 Reviews of "Words Strung , Aching and Patsy Cline"
Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on May 11, 2003
yea well, she can do it cant she,even as you have with this...pretty good for a ramblin...

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on May 11, 2003
Micha,
Good to see you back butterfly! Grand tribute, grand write, no surprise at all...
My compliments, and as always, your words at my site....yes gifts. Fly on firefly, fly high indeed....
Rodney Evan Bohen

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
I feel the same way about Billie's "Strange Fruit" and this poem is me to strange fruit when my headaches and i am still filling my glass

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
"weaving through the lost words" as only a poet can and you ARE a poet. Applause, applause.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
You amaze me! What a powerful write, Micha.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
Micha,
This is so true! I use music all the time to get me more in touch with myself, or to move me out of a place I don't want to be in anymore. And I understand what you are saying about Patsy, my mother listened to her non-stop for years, and Crazy was her favorite song!
"make a lost
time
almost
wind-up
and stare
through stained glass
unbroken"
That is gorgeous!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
Crazy.. Crazy for feeling .. Crazy for loving you.. I can hear her .. She was the one and ONLY... This was an awesome write.. Brought me into your mind.. Know the feelings of this wonderful inspired write!

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
You have a way of building up the emotion as you write it is so vivid we can feel your emotion at the time of writing. I have looked at a number of your poems and you show a unique style which always takes the reader on a ride.
I am glad Maria pointed me to your poetry
Bravo!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
a delightfully crazy flow of thoughts ;)

Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
I'm half drunk myself right now and the words ring true. Keep writing brother.

Adam

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2003
Right, nobody can sing CRAZY like Patsy, but everybody keeps trying. Well done, Micha. Bravo.


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