rambling, writing whatever comes out, with Patsy Cline singing back in there, somewhere... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Half drunk, words playing ping-pong inside my aching head, but aching ain't uncommon, no
Half drunk back of my mind Patsy Cline singing "Crazy" Damn, nobody, nobody can sing that song like her, like Patsy Cline
And she's been roaming my aches, singing my mind inside my heart, my ache
Inside, time too fast can't, today, can't seem to find the words roving through-- driving my hell to the backseat for a minute here and there... see?
Still, it's her and that woman, that song can move one make a lost time almost wind-up and stare through stained glass, unbroken, when she starts again, Patsy Cline...
Damn, I ought to feel lucky
hearing that woman mean something more than even music can define, when she sings "Crazy"-- Inside, see?
Thoughts wandering but not without one more lost, strong, singing so fine dreamt lady song bird, weaving through the lost words roaming through my mind.
And that can't be all bad, no that can't be all that bad at all
When I hear it, hear her call
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Reviews of "Words Strung , Aching and Patsy Cline"
Micha,
Good to see you back butterfly! Grand tribute, grand write, no surprise at all...
My compliments, and as always, your words at my site....yes gifts. Fly on firefly, fly high indeed....
Rodney Evan Bohen
Micha,
This is so true! I use music all the time to get me more in touch with myself, or to move me out of a place I don't want to be in anymore. And I understand what you are saying about Patsy, my mother listened to her non-stop for years, and Crazy was her favorite song!
"make a lost
time
almost
wind-up
and stare
through stained glass
unbroken"
That is gorgeous!
Crazy.. Crazy for feeling .. Crazy for loving you.. I can hear her .. She was the one and ONLY... This was an awesome write.. Brought me into your mind.. Know the feelings of this wonderful inspired write!
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2003
You have a way of building up the emotion as you write it is so vivid we can feel your emotion at the time of writing. I have looked at a number of your poems and you show a unique style which always takes the reader on a ride.
I am glad Maria pointed me to your poetry
Bravo!!!
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Good to see you back butterfly! Grand tribute, grand write, no surprise at all...
My compliments, and as always, your words at my site....yes gifts. Fly on firefly, fly high indeed....
Rodney Evan Bohen
This is so true! I use music all the time to get me more in touch with myself, or to move me out of a place I don't want to be in anymore. And I understand what you are saying about Patsy, my mother listened to her non-stop for years, and Crazy was her favorite song!
"make a lost
time
almost
wind-up
and stare
through stained glass
unbroken"
That is gorgeous!
Hugs,
Maria
I am glad Maria pointed me to your poetry
Bravo!!!
Adam