drowning/grasping...for that gasp of air ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Within the Deep... It seems that lives are wrung From bloodless veins of stony gray Threaded dreams unstrung
and...
Within this Deep... It seems that death is sung As sneering Sirens lay await Seductive answers, hellish fate
yet...
Within... at tmes? It is these bloodless veins one hears And sneering Sirens stare, watching as the shredded Threads of one small rope, become a gasp for air...
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Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2003
I agree Wow!! Now you must know I love this! My sorta poem indeed....I'll be reading you.
Ooh! A story unfurls in captivating poetry. You're very good!
-br-
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
Micha,,,,,
Sis this is so touching
"Within this Deep...
It seems that death is sung
As sneering Sirens lay await
Seductive answers, hellish fate"
totaly excellent I have fewlt this way before...
You capture this so well {{sopul Sis]]}}}
Love it and you!!!!
God Bless
Hugs
PJ
Soul sis}}}}}}}}
Robert Burns' first daughter was Elizabeth. Her story and the five descendants Scottish lives are recorded here with the Bard's message today as ever in need. Al Quida listen: Then let us pray that come it may, As come it will for a' that. That Sense
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I adore strength in words!
Ty, Dani
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Namaste'
Melanie
-br-
Sis this is so touching
"Within this Deep...
It seems that death is sung
As sneering Sirens lay await
Seductive answers, hellish fate"
totaly excellent I have fewlt this way before...
You capture this so well {{sopul Sis]]}}}
Love it and you!!!!
God Bless
Hugs
PJ
Soul sis}}}}}}}}
Leland