this was a freeflow that simply came out, not quite a poem, more a stream of consciousness written out, simply because...
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Sometimes caring hurts and that makes no sense, yet, sometimes it does and sometimes caring makes one wonder if it is too much for one or the other, the one whose pain you want to take away yet you really don't know how, but you care so you try and... sometimes you don't know why you care, but you do, even when you ache from the pain you feel that may or may not be real and when it is and you try to share that care, well sometimes you wonder as it seems that all you may be able to do is to bring a smile, a tear, a moment too quickly gone to have done much good, but you cannot help yourself and so you simply go on caring not even knowing why but knowing it is all you have that does not lie...
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Reviews of "Caring..."
Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2004
This wonderfully expressed and heartfelt message reminded me of the song lyrics... "You always hurt the one you love, the one you should never hurt at all."
Awesome I love your just came outs.
Slices of life in gem cased lockets they are and this one will hang around me meories a long time
"from the
pain you
feel
that may or
may not be
real
and
when it is and
you try to
share"
PJ
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2003
Micha I have learned in my years that you can love a person too much...when you love too much you care to much...and you take all their burdens upon yourself and then yourself is lost....I know...I have done it...and I am doing it now...it is just how we are made up...I loved this..floria
This book summarizes life's ten toughest tests with ten passwords each to pass these tests. The current overload, speed of change and chaos are all summarized well enough to get to the Land of Simple on the other side quicker than usual.
Bobbi
~Joseph
Slices of life in gem cased lockets they are and this one will hang around me meories a long time
"from the
pain you
feel
that may or
may not be
real
and
when it is and
you try to
share"
PJ