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Caring...
by Micha Julian → (All Poetry by Micha Julian)
  
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this was a freeflow that simply came out, not quite a poem, more a stream of consciousness written out, simply because...

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Sometimes
caring
hurts
and that
makes no sense,
yet,
sometimes
it does
and
sometimes
caring
makes one
wonder
if it is too much
for one
or the other,
the one
whose pain you want
to take away
yet you really don't
know how,
but you care
so you try
and...
sometimes
you
don't know
why you
care, but
you do, even
when you ache
from the
pain you
feel
that may or
may not be
real
and
when it is and
you try to
share
that care, well
sometimes
you
wonder as
it seems that all
you may be able to
do
is to
bring a smile,
a tear,
a moment too quickly
gone to have done
much good, but
you cannot
help yourself
and so you
simply go on
caring
not even knowing why
but
knowing it is
all you
have
that
does not
lie...


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 Reviews of "Caring..."
Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)
Reviewed on August 20, 2004
This wonderfully expressed and heartfelt message reminded me of the song lyrics... "You always hurt the one you love, the one you should never hurt at all."


Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
Micha, this is magnificient in its honesty and simplicity. Great Job!
Bobbi

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
"all you have that does not lie" there you have it M, distilled to one fine crystalline point

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
This is lovely. I'm glad this thought came to you and you shared.

~Joseph

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
So well said. Caring is a precious thing, caring too much is a destructive one for both parties.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 17, 2003
came out nicely...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2003
Awesome I love your just came outs.
Slices of life in gem cased lockets they are and this one will hang around me meories a long time
"from the
pain you
feel
that may or
may not be
real
and
when it is and
you try to
share"
PJ

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2003
Micha I have learned in my years that you can love a person too much...when you love too much you care to much...and you take all their burdens upon yourself and then yourself is lost....I know...I have done it...and I am doing it now...it is just how we are made up...I loved this..floria


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