So much for so little (poem) by Tommy L Thomas on AuthorsDen

So much for so little
by Tommy L Thomas → (All Poetry by Tommy L Thomas)
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Love will make you give your all and all to a lover. but many times we gives so much but receives so little.
SO SO MUCH FOR SO LITTLE When we met you were down and out Didn’t know what to do and nothing you cared about You said you needed a friend to love and be with through thick and thin I opened my heart and let you in. Without hesitation I gave you my all and all Always by your side when you needed me at your every call Now that you are on your feet and as fit as a fiddle You want to leave me with a broken heart when I’ve given you so much and received so little. You are free to go Even though I want you so When it is plain There is nothing to gain To try to keep you in my heart Wishing on a star we’d never part. I’ll do anything to keep you in my life Even be in pain and pay the price Just to hold you one more time The way you make me feel has to be a crime Breaking my heart to pieces when it is so brittle Paying the price for giving you so much and receiving so little.

Reviewed by Sister Deborah Young

Reviewed on July 13, 2009

Wisdom paints a picture upon a canvas, yet, writing is good for the soul. Great Job, Tommy! Sis. "D"

Reviewed by Michael Jones

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

Thommy this is a magnificent write and you are telling just like it is. Most people abuse love wheather they understand it or not. They are just leaches and someday they will have to answer for the innocent blood they sucked. Love conquers all and that is why we will always rise!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on March 28, 2009

Excellent poem,great work,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

This is very compelling, Tommy; and I can thouroughly relate to what you are expressing via your verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE IN PAIN BUT YOU HAVE THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva