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Advancement
by Casey S Bell → (All Poetry by Casey S Bell)
Friday, January 24, 2020    Rated "G" by the Author.
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"Advancement" from my poetry book, "Poems from the Other Side."

I wanted to write something using old English. I hope I succeed.

 

"Advancement" from my poetry book, "Poems from the Other Side"


I see thy water slide down thou brow

And I simply wonder why and how

How shall thou be anxious and uptight?

How shall thou be nervous and pale white?

Calm thyself and be undisturbed

There is no reason to be perturbed

Calm thyself at once and be at peace

Thy sweat, thy shaking thou must surely cease

For I have come to bring you good tidings and joy

Just like a toy brings to a little school boy

For thy employment you will surely keep

Like a good shepherd who leads his sheep

Thy have shown me you are ready to lead

From my smile and my tone I am sure you can read

This briefing I have summoned is no concern

For a raise and promotion you have more then earned

So congratulations to you on such a great job

Don’t let this go to your head and become a snob.


 

 

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 Reviews of "Advancement"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 26, 2020
I think you succeeded with old English although you may have you some words that were not used in old English but the meaning was couched in other words, no longer used. But I believe the meaning of your poem was clear. You were encouraging students to move forward proudly rather than be anxious about the process.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on January 25, 2020
Sometimes we advance to the front,
Sometimes to the rear,
But I enjoyed your poem,
And give it a hardy cheer.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on January 24, 2020
Your poem reminds me of a favorite board game, "Go to the head of the class." Well said...

John Michael


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