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Love's Forbidden Garden
by Bennett Kremen → (All Poetry by Bennett Kremen)
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Love's longing and hope

 

 

                                       Love's Forbidden Garden

                                          The dazzling emerald

                                          of hummingbirds

                                          conquer one and all 

                                          as does the ravaging

                                          swoon of new love.

                                          But if that love's

                                          dashed when hope

                                          and longing rage

                                          on, what comes are

                                          mobs of vicious

                                          hummingbirds pillaging

                                          a forbidden garden. ..................................................................................................................

copyright 2011  Bennett Kremen        author of  Savage Days Haunted Nights.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Love's Forbidden Garden"
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on August 5, 2011
Amen to that. I LOVE this one, Bennett. Fantastic imagery, so perfect, especially that killer ending. Have to add it to my favorites. Oh, btw, hope you don't mind, but a character in the kids book I'm currently working on, a doctor, has your last name, lol. When I write stories, the names just pop in my head and I go with them, and yours did in the new one- hope you don't mind. :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 30, 2011
The metaphor and imagery that you have choses server to powerfully emphasize your theme, Bennett. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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