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Can You See Me
by Las Vegas Patti → (All Poetry by Las Vegas Patti)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
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Wondering if I'm seen?

Could I do it, Is it there, Is it passion, Is it fear
Is it me, Is it he, A moment in time, Could it possibly bind
I want love, Can I give love, He wants love, Can I give me, Can it be
Good enough, Don't know, Too late, Too slow
Push it down, Make it go away, Keep it light, Make it friends
Reminders, Old ways, Present day, Past life
Old, Stop thinking, Keep her safe
Run away, Stow away, Go away, No more play
Comes a time, Thoughts prevail, Deep reflections, Bout life stops
Another night, A new day, Back to sleep, Old life keeps

Do you see me, Do you care
Give me something, More than a stare
Fun is great, But depth is a must
Something underneath, that others miss
I see it in you, as you pass on thru
Will you be back for me, or leave me free
Can we risk the work it will take
To hold onto the extrordinary partners
we could make

 


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 Reviews of "Can You See Me"
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Great poem,Take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 6, 2009
Pondering questions that there may be no answer to, done well....

Be always safe,
Karen


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