I gazed with skepticism wondering if I'd dare.
If I were to fail, would anyone care?
It was so vast and wide - this long forgotten sea!
But I dove straight and strong to save what was left of me.
I braved the deep end of a pretentious calm,
To find a treasure cradled in my palm.
DARING...AND THEN, THOUGH IT ALL, FINDING THE 'TREASURE' OF...YOURSELF. A MOST ENJOYED WORK, DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Very nice! What a vast a wide sea indeed. But your resolve brings hope and a treasure. This is very good.
Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2010
I like how you have a straight-forward approach. This one is a guiding light, and is very clean. Thanks for this, Poetess. What's in your palm; do you still have that treasure?
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Peace,
Dayvid