...Comes Around! (stole - robbers) (poem) by Georgia M McDowell on AuthorsDen

...Comes Around! (stole - robbers)
by Georgia M McDowell → (All Poetry by Georgia M McDowell)
Wednesday, May 23, 2018 Rated "G" by the Author.

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Give good, pretty gifts so you can live great! Did you ever wonder...why you feel tired,exhausted after sharing a beautiful thought or wonderful life dream with others? Their words left you feeling defeated & without hope or energy. If this happened to you, they probably robbed you of your organic-Joy! They stole your Hope for a better Happy - day, in so many ways. To steal your Trust, Good-Spirit(s) & your Good-Intentions was far more worse...than stealing any Object(s) that you owned. It is written...The Joy-of-the Lord is OUR strength.This poem was inspired & dedicated to my late friend&African dancer Ms Linda Murrey. Thanks to all & Enjoy the read.

What goes around ... ( echo ) Two ugly black birds flew into my yard; Landing upon my "fine house" within Where - there were many best regards. What goes around ... What goes around ... ( echo ) Two ugly black birds they use to come to sit and "give chatter" . Later I found they were "haters" who gathered in town, they ... Didn't plan to "GIVE" , but to "TAKE" from me; just ... To create hectic & cause a RIOT-in-my "GRAY-MATTER" you see. What goes around ... What goes around ... ( echo ) Two ugly black birds would NEVER in God's eyes Fly high or SOAR for all to ADORE . The door of FAVORS has been closed & locked And I,... don't live there ... anymore! What goes around ... What goes arouind ... ( echo ) Two ugly black birds, I'll show you two ugly black birds...! You stole from me ..., you two ugly black birds . Tried to get a "plenty" but illegally... I will pray for these two black birds really . And just as the days grow nearer, to walk the road to HEAVEN And seems clearer ..., Clever - to - see by me that they were the ONE "two's" who paid dues. Whenever both were old and so bold when they sold their SOULS to the devil ... oh,... oh,... oh,... oh! What goes around ... what goes around ... What goes around ... ( echo ) Two ugly black birds flew into my yard; Landing upon my "fine house" within Where - there were many best regards...what then? And then ! What goes around ... What goes around .. ( echo ) Two ugly black birds those TOO - CRUEL black birds I must certainly have to forgive . In order that I "MAE" prosper and continue to LIVE ... That I "MAE" prosper ... and ... continue ... to ... LIVE! / pswo12-31-2014 / © Copyright 2014, all rights reserved

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on May 24, 2018

This certainly makes for a fine rap with a moral message that is driven through with repetition like a hammer to one's brain.

Enjoyed.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on May 23, 2018

Yes indeed. Forgiveness is certainly one of the important keys. Forgiving is not forgetting though. It's letting go of the hurt so we can continue on unfettered. Rap on, sister Georgia. Your work is energizing. So is your faith. Still wanna 'hear' it. Peace... r