Haggard's Halls ( Part XX ) (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 8, 2008

This poem is AWESOME Paul, I want to be here, (( Haggard's Halls)) Think I've been here, hiding around
a darkly lit corner!
Your chosen words astound me Paul!
Wonderful job done with evil and good/Etc.
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Soulful SHEExooo

STay Positive! I'm glad I am here, I missed y o u r deep knowing heart! I will try not to drift too far, now... I will try, if so I will stay as I am about to show!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on June 18, 2008

The Hall's echo in their gallant pride, knowing what prevails within them! Excellent Paul~

Sorry I've been so invisible...my halls weren't echoing, they were secretly building new ones behind my back, whispering in too low of voices and somehow...?...I done lost my way...:)
But, I'm back! ...and I must catch up!
"Which way did he go George, which way did he go?" LOL! What was that off of???...some cartoon probably :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Like the sound of marching feet. I love the strong drum-beat rhythm to match the mood and tone of this write, Paul. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Good Morning Paul,
I enjoyed Haggaed's Halls & felt apart of the vision I could see within your words
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

Needless to say.. a profound write indeed...

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

Great verse. It flows well . I can almost feel the mystic in Haggard Halls......M

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

A wonderfully written, inspiring poem, Paul. I will have to catch up on your wonderful series ... Love and hugs to you my friend - Tiana

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Paul,
I love how you voice this challenge with such positivity. This part in the series slips right into place with its strong rhythm and rhyme. Love your word choices in this part - good and bad are clearly outlined. Your talent shines here! Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

All those times I felt my life had stalled,
I found myself in haggards halls.
Excellent write.

Pierre

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

A beautiful prophetic piece that leaves one to take pause.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Paul, you know I love Haggard's Hall series, and this one is superb. Great internal rhyme and your rhythmic flow is fantastic!...ET

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

great versing Paul

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

very well developed, inspirational poem ...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Awesome. This is my first exposure to your story. I will be reading more. Liz

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Very well done Paul. Great series you're doing here. Keep it up my friend.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

This is Spectaular,,, Your words are amazing,,piercing the heart.
Love and Blessings to you,
Christine

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

I can't tell you how much I look forward to your posts. Your writing is superb and your words and combinations of words are beautifully replete with meaning and insight. Your wisdom and your propensity for deep thought glow in this lovely write.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Sorry to go wandering off into la la land, but every time I see the word Haggard I think of Merle Haggard. I still enjoyed your inspirational write.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Paul, I see this in the same way as Fee does...becoming a wonderful book of verse...a lesson held within, for you teach much.

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Good versus evil penned in a vivid way. For we battle not against flesh and blood.............Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Although this is a classic story that I can see becoming a book as notable as the Knights of the Round Table, I can also see certain segments being ammended to make fantastic song lyrics...sort of Meatloaf style. Well done as always Paul.

Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

The road to hell is an easy one once you ride on its slippery slope but you must prevail and with the Trinity your victory you soon will have won