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A tear at the edge of my sorrow
by William Bonilla → (All Poetry by William Bonilla)
Saturday, September 5, 2020    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A tear at the edge of my sorrow
~~~~~~~~~~~~*~~~~~~~~~~~

Have you ever drove
on a road passing
upon the side
a cross or two
with flowers.

Immortalizing one
who met his doom
leaving thoughts
and unanswered
questions in mind.

Today upon a trek
I saw at a distance
a man sitting
on the side of the road
Thought him tired
And resting.

As we closed by him
I saw a man with deep
sorrow upon his face
noticing him sitting
among
Two crosses and flowers.

As he buried his face
within his hands
hiding escaping tears
the scene was heart
Braking.

As we continued driving
I felt a tear forming
at the edge
of my most deepening
sorrow.


By: William Bonilla
D'Artagnan
08/21/2020


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 10, 2021
I believe that is called compassion... ...if humans were to espouse that concept and live by it, this world would know peace at last... ...and have a chance to survive. Thank you for sharing, William. Love and peace to you,

Regis. ☮🍁

Reviewed on October 18, 2020
Your words bring to mind of several memorials around here. I say a little prayer for those who loved the deceased most every time. Such a sad sight. You wrote some empathetic words and that makes you a real man, William! Kudos!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 4, 2020
Seen them multiple times and wondered their origin, also wondering if that would be my end result, gives one thoughts for rest of traveling day...-e-

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 7, 2020
I DON'T CARE WHO WE ARE WE ALL CAN RELATE TO SOMEONE'S SORROW AND PAIN.
INDEED AND UNFORTUNATELY, IN THESE DAYS OF EXTREME SADNESS WHICH EXIST IN AMERICA...MANY SUCH CROSSES WITH FLOWERS ARE SEEN. AND THOSE THAT OBSERVE THEM, LIKE YOU AND SO MANY OTHERS, DO NOT HAVE TO KNOW THE MOURNING INDIVIDUALS TO BE SYMPATHETIC AND 'FEEL' THEIR PAIN. A WELL DONE, BITTERSWEET SHARING, MY FRIEND, THANK YOU. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 7, 2020
Road accidents what they are, some roadsides would have thousands of crosses. A very poignant poem when you enter the man grieving.

But the idea of glorifying a place of death along roadways should be considered a temporary thing, lasting a short while in remembrance to those passing by. Generally those made with wooden sticks and flowers do disappear in time. But family tragedies should not become roadside memorials. In time they would become a nuisance and roadside distraction. There are exceptions, particularly for historical events.

Ron

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on September 6, 2020
So sad. Yes, I've seen those crosses and flowers. Sometimes there's even a name either on the cross or on a sign nearby. It is heartbreaking to think of a life cut short, leaving behind loved ones to grieve.

Rebecca

Reviewed on September 6, 2020
That kind of sorrow is contagious - we see, and we feel.

Sandie

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 6, 2020
Other people's sorrow can become our own, it depends on the individual and his/her level of empathy. Your poem expresses great empathy.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 6, 2020
such crosses tell of misery and loss


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