A theme I view
Of a learning tree
From within a lonely
Dark room.
~*~
As twilight, sipped through
venetian blinds
A mind wondering.
~*~
Over the humming
Of an over worked
Air conditioner
In a hot Summer night.
~*~
Words I see in the air
Or should I say
Floating within my head
As I reach for them
~*~
Attempting
To make sense, as I place them
In some sorted order
Within my mind.
~*~
Before I scribe them
On a parchment
Within
The darkness of my room.
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THE VISION WAS 'CAPTURED'...BEAUTIFULLY! THANKS FOR THE SHARE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS +INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Sometime loneliness and darkness enhance our mood and we write things we never dreamed we could write. You are a deep and intuitive writer. I realy think you need to publish a select book of poetry. Bill
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2003
Ooo William I am loving your Twilight Vision...so beautifully and masterfully written...EXCELLANT!!!!
~Nikki~
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
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~Nikki~
Jack
This is wonderful. I can relate to it well.
Excellent.
~Chrissie
Beautiful write...
Love the title as well...
Trixie :)
venetian blinds
A mind wondering.
Deep thoughts ran through my head reading this William....thank you!!
Love
Tinka
Reindeer
My best vision is pre-dawn. As always your work is excellently written!
tn