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Lost in Ubiquity
by Sara Coslett → (All Poetry by Sara Coslett)
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Tonight I watched a video on a Mozilla Firefox add-on called "ubiquity". I loved the word and tried to build a poem around it.

If you are interested in the download you can find it here:

https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/addon/9527


One, two, three times --
I tried. I loved you always.
Smiling politely at your invisibility
Touching the universe with my everything.

But the years kept passing;
The action kept pumping;
The dread kept suffocating;
My dreams kept falling
. . . into oblivion.

Until I lost myself in ubiquity.


© 2009 Sara Coslett
   

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 Reviews of "Lost in Ubiquity"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 17, 2009
All of this from one word! An absolutely beautiful write, Sara! Loved it!

Anna

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on August 26, 2009
I like what you did with this word...it is a favorite of mine as well...

I especially like the second stanza.

Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2009
I love that word, too... and like what you've done to pull out its nuance. Nice poem.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 12, 2009
Looking deep into one's soul and blossoming with truth...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
sometimes being lost in ubiquity allows us to find more of ourselves ...

very well developed thought and finely tuned poetic application of its implications ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Sara,
You make a simple moment of inspiration so telling and meaningful, and convey the essentials of experience all of us can relate to directly.

John

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
...TRYING HARD TO REACH ANOTHER...BUT LOSING YOURSELF IN THE PROCESS. WELL WRITTEN. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
So much in so few lines, Sara.
I know this dream well...racing here and there and everywhere,
lost and searching for I know not what.

-gene.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
"Touching the universe with my everything" is a great line. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 11, 2009
Very nicely done and a special thanks to Karla for helping me with the word itsefl. You do these poems sooo well. Thank you for sharing video and poem.
hugs
fee

Reviewed on August 10, 2009
Ubiquitous: adjective. Omniscient; everywhere at once. Sara, this is a powerpacked little number - took matters into your own hands, I see. =] What I got, reading these lines - am I even close? Well done, in any event, enjoyed this one.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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