This song is the newest addition to my lyrics portfolio...The demo should be ready in two weeks if all goes well...keep your fingers crossed
(1) once we were strong and could face anything but it seems we've let it all slip away though I'd like to believe we could work things out if you choose to leave... I won't ask you to stay
chorus
cause I can see in your eyes the time has come doesnt matter now who was right or wrong if I begged you to stay you'd be holding out and I would only be holding on
(2)
we often said our love would last forever but I guess forever sometimes is too long cause when I smile at you I see a subtle change and there's an emptiness ...where once I belonged
(3)
once we were strong and could face anything guess I'm wrong to hang on to yesterday so pretend you dont see tears when we say goodbye just turn the corner....and walk away
chorus
cause I can see in your eyes the time has come doesnt matter now who was right or wrong if I begged you to stay you'd be holding out and I would only be holding on
copyright :2003 Deborah Carter
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Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2003
I like this. Can't wait to hear the demo rendition of it. Bill