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Altitude Adjustment
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Just some musings here......

I was reading the book "Wicked" a few weeks back, about the wicked witch of the west, its a broadway play I have not yet seen....but intend to...
One of the first scenes of the book describes the witch flying a mile over Emerald City...and I thought to myself as I read this....Imagine if I could be a mile above my life, and look at it with a different attitude/altitude lol
What would I do with "me".


I seldom end up where I wanted to go, but almost always end up where I need to be” - D Adams

 

 

 

ALTITUDE ADJUSTMENT

 

A mile above my circumstance

Just east of indecision

Rotating on a gust of thought

I met my own collision!

 

BAM!

 

The power of strength that clutched me
Made my compass twist and spin
Whilst heading north of nowhere

I spiraled on the winds

 

Cradled in a cyclone

It rocked me to and fro

A whirlwind for the witless

I saw my life below

 

In flashes fast against the night

Sharp slices knifed the dark

As thunder boomed and thought typhooned

I slid down heaven's arc

 

Into this womb of silence

Untouched was I by storm

In the center of this hurricane

I found myself....reborn

 

Pax

A

2/1/06

 

 

{A thank you to my friend Mr Mahoney for help with the second stanza!}
 

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 Reviews of "Altitude Adjustment"
Reviewed by Barbara Henry
Reviewed on December 14, 2012
Great introspection,and a mile above(figuratively) one's circumstances is the ideal place to be to get answers:Not too close nor too far away.
Thanks for sharing this,and continued success.
Barbara J Henry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 21, 2006
"Into this womb of silence
Untouched was I by storm
In the center of this hurricane
I found myself....reborn"

Insightful and inspirational. Thank you, Anita. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Debashish Haar
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
That ending is fabulous. I was wondering what you are doing on the east of indecision, as I crossed you from the other side :)

D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Outstanding piece Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
the mind's capability for regeneration is, indeed, amazing. our greatest gift from the creatrix. excellent evocation, poet.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Such a profound statement of self...Ed

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
In the eye of the storm, quiet and untouched by the whirling winds around us. Love the bird's eye view wisdom of this write and the dragon pics in the link! I was born in the year of the Dragon. The witch in the photo above looks like she's using her arms as a sail, maybe her broom needs a tune-up, lol. (Good, you're staying! Now I can eat that cookie, Anita) Perfect rhythm and beautifully written...

Lin


Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
it would be great if the center of the hurricane was eternal ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Amazing write and an amazing subject that perhaps we should all contemplate and look a new at our lifes and how we live them. We tend to get ourselves in ruts and the blame is always cast outwards when perhaps we should be looking inward. Thanks for opening eyes held shut.

Felix

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
You have always been a joy to read and it seems you are reaching an even higher level!Exceptional writing Lady Comeback, forgood ihope;-)pax...
Eileen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Fantastic poem, Anita. It is a good idea to periodically stand back and take a hard look at our life; check on our direction and our attitude and make necessary modifications. I do this often, but never with as much flair and fun as you have done here. Excellent writing! I am really enjoying having you back!

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Lady A,

Beautiful change of attitude many can learn from--especially me. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
I agree with the consensus of opinion below, Anita
This is a good adjustment and redirection...:)
I love the picture and quote too !
This is an excellent end to my evening reviews !
Peter

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
great work! I hope that you stick around here. I very much enjoy your writings.


Susan


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