4 YET MORE (poem) by A PAX on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by CHINMOY BOSE

Reviewed on February 22, 2015

Good poem. I like it.

Reviewed by deepak marathe (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2015

lovely

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

:)
This Is A Fun Read & I especially like the fresh made bed is a trampoline! lol

Vickie

Reviewed by Shane Ward

Reviewed on December 30, 2006

Just had my grandchildren come to visit. Took three days to clear up what they had messed in an afternoon. But who cares. Your poem describes all manner of fun, which is something we oldies tend to forget. Why not be a four year old again?

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

So sweet...wonderful write Anita!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

I hope I still have that 4 yr old in me!
Great write! ;)

Reviewed by Libby Stone (Reader)

Reviewed on November 8, 2003

This is really beautiful and paints a wonderful picture of children at play...I loved it.
Many Blessings,
Libby

Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Hey you know what? You just wrote your best poem! Seriously...I think I found myself in EVERY line. That's never happened to me before. Awesome Anita! Just awesome....(gezzzzzzzz I love your rhyme...you make it read like water over the dam. It just flows.)

...love that picture too.... ;o)

You're so much cooler than me!

~Dana~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Excellent!!!!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

A wonderful write
excellent

William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

You bring to memory, to mind and to life the wonders of childhood. Thank you for this offering.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Children are a joy
The one's who act half way decent..
Enjoyed the write.......

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

A delightful whimsical poem with outstanding rhyme and meter Anita!(So glad it's nov. almost d day for you;-)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Ah yes the lipstick.....my mothers friend was not as impressed with my artwork as I was :-)

Wonderful write full of imagination that I totally enjoyed. Also loved the way you ended this with the joy of the child living in our souls :-) Great write!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Anita, I really liked being brought back in time and by the way it has a beautiful rhyme

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

Your words too many beautiful memories of childhood and of my children. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

Reviewed by J. Pajot

Reviewed on November 7, 2003

So sweet...and so true. Wonderful emotionn and imagery. Left me wanting to run outside in my bare feet...but its cold. Really fun and uplifting piece.