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I Stand
by Daniel E. Lambert → (All Poetry by Daniel E. Lambert)
Monday, August 31, 2020    Rated "G" by the Author.
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This is a patriotic poem. I am not interested in political criticism of my poem, but I am happy to read criticism based on the poem itself. Thank you.

 

I had a dream last night;

I met a man who gripped my hand so tight;

And led me down a long, curving road.

“Why do you look so troubled?” he asked.

I looked at him; I could only gasp:

“May I ask a favor, if I could be so bold?”

He stroked his long, snow-white beard,

Reached out his hand, and wiped my tear.

 

“My name is Uncle Sam, my son;

When you call, I’ll surely come

To right the wrongs, and save the day,

So let us walk; please have your say;

I’ll listen close, because I’m all ears;

But promise me: no more tears.”

 

I told him of the world today,

And how our country had lost its way:

“When athletes gather to play a game,

And our anthem is sung, to praise America’s name,

Some players kneel; they refuse to stand;

Even as our flag flies over the land.

Over their hearts, they do not place their hand.

They take a knee; I don’t understand.”

My new friend looked me straight in the eye,

And wiped his own tear; it was his turn to cry.

“Take my hand; I’ll show you a place…

Filled with crying and sorrow, but also with grace…

Once you talk with those who dwell there,

Go back and tell your countrymen why they should care;

Once you tell them, I pray they’ll understand,

Why when our flag flies, they should all stand.”

 

As Sam walked down the road, he asked that I follow,

And soon we arrived at a large, barren hollow.

It was a wind-swept plain, a valley of dust

Strung with barbed wire that was going to rust.

Dugouts and foxholes were strewn here and there,

The smell of smoke and napalm filled the air.

 

First, we met a man in a tri-corner hat;

“I fought with Washington,” he said with a rasp.

“I died at Bunker Hill, in the frozen Winter;

Fighting the British, with a cold wind so bitter.

Look at our flag, in the field of blue;

Part of my coat is there: it looks so new!”

 

Then Sam he did lead me, to a place oh-so-strange,

A tent on the battleground, where the dead and the lame

Lie on cots and in caskets, some awake and some still.

A man called us over, he said his name was Will:

“I fought hard at Gettysburg, I’ll tell you true ;

My brother’s uniform was grey, mine was blue.

When I was wounded, they wrapped my head tight,

In a bandage of cotton, oh so white.

That same white you can see now,

If you open your eyes,

It’s in the white stripes,

of the flag that you fly.”

 

“One more man we’ll meet now,”

Sam, he did say, as he took my hand,

And led me away.

A man in a green uniform,

Shook my hand and Sam’s:

“I’m with the Army, I died in the sand,

On a Normandy beach, my rifle still in my hands.

You can still see the wound here,

Right over my heart:

A German bullet went in, and tore me apart.

The red that you see here, in this hole in my chest,

Is in the red stripes of our flag, that flutters as I rest.”

 

He looked me in the eye, this old Uncle Sam,

And touched my fingers with his old, weathered hand.

“Don’t forget to tell them, all over our great land;

When our flag is unfurled, our anthem played by a band:

Give them these reasons, why they should stand.”   

 


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 Reviews of "I Stand"
Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on September 2, 2020
Well said, Dan. I salute you.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 2, 2020
Excellent write. Thank you for posting.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 1, 2020
Your poem is a great tribute to all the people who fought for what has been considered the American way of life when it was threatened or not. When death occurs in the military in a family, it becomes much more a duty to honor that death. In my family, one of my uncles never left the United States and served from 1941 to 1963 ending as a consultant in Vietnam with servants. He is alive with his wife at 101. My other two uncles suffered from serious PTSD after the war, causing great harm to their wives and many children. Perhaps better if they had died or not served.

Your poem does not mention the people with dark skin who joined their bosses and even their masters as slaves and patriotically fought for the same freedoms, especially of speech, that all of those dead you mentioned did. In every war, they died in higher proportion to those most honored but were immediately forgotten after the war. Those that are modern warriors "for the people," like Roman gladiators, mostly slaves, have decided that it is time that they have faced "too much," and must speak out in positive ways so that the rest of us can understand their pain or be heroes but underclass citizens.

Have you ever been stopped by police for merely driving or riding riding with people of color? I have… Many times. So have these heroes of sports, driving in their own neighborhoods.

Most of the 13 colonists were patriotic subjects of the Crown of England. They served under Union Jack and marched and sang English fighting songs and their anthem, God Save the King. It was rabble-rousers In Boston and Philadelphia that didn't like England taking all of their hard labor and resources and leaving them with less. Sending over governors to rule over them and tax them without representation. This rabble, many from religious sects that were unwelcome in Europe or even criminals who escaped to a world where there wasn't as much law to find them out, became the soldiers of the American Revolution, Washington's ragtag army. Among that army were many men of dark color. They've been fighting for a part of the American heritage ever since.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on September 1, 2020
i feel the same way.


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