Within the purple mist of dreams,
Where only gods and dreamers dare
Carrara wings of butterflies,
Reflect the moon's ascetic stare
Deep within this twilight place,
The lovers and the poets dwell
Whose words do echo to the stars,
A strange enchanting magic spell
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Poets are but dreams of gods,
That rise beyond their bygone age
To sing unknowingly their songs,
Upon the poet's arduous page
There to cull from Odin's charge,
Immortals wrapped in slumber's arms
As lotus in quiescent rest,
Must rise to greet Aurora's charms
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When weary grows the moon, and pales,
Upon the river of the sky
Euterpe wakes from restless sleep,
To bid the poet's heart to fly
In tune to strains of lyre and flute,
The song of sweet Caliope
There sails upon those silver winds,
And whispers soft an ancient plea.
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The sighs on breeze's breath are borne,
From mountains long forgotten now
From those who slumber deep beneath,
An age old wreath of laurel's bough
And with the breeze, comes gentle rain,
Upon which lovers' tears are heard;
The gift of the Greeks revived. Your understanding of the myths and choice of words is outstanding. I agree, spellbinding.
Ron
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 4, 2005
The poem is spellbinding. You don't seem to write often. The word quality not quantity comes to mind.
I'm not worthy. The skill of your poetry is breath taking.
I am in awe of your writing, Joni. Thank you for commenting on my poem so that I came here to find your wonderful poetry. You are such a talented writer. Of the three poems I have read of yours today, I can honestly say I wish I had written each of them.
Take care,
Sherry
You are an amazing poet!
Only 1 poet has inspired me to constantly re-read her work, until now Melissa Rives! You are Outstanding and very inspiring!
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2003
Spellbinding.. Loved this from start to finish. By the way - we haven't met yet. Welcome to the Den. Hope your stay here is as wonderful as mine has been.
Namaste'
Melanie
I, too, am spellbound by your words; wow. I like what Andy said, I agree, 1000 per cent. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Ron
I'm not worthy. The skill of your poetry is breath taking.
Take care,
Sherry
Felix
Regis
Only 1 poet has inspired me to constantly re-read her work, until now Melissa Rives! You are Outstanding and very inspiring!
Namaste'
Melanie
I'm awed.
John