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They wrote it all down
by Denise Edwards → (All Poetry by Denise Edwards)
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Old Man River’s laughing at me
making fun of my misery

I didn’t know the calamity
That losing you would bring me

The Moon said I’d be lonely
Without you, my one and only

The Stars said I’d cry a river too
And fill the lake with tears of blue

But I said, hey, what do they know?
But I knew when I watched you go

Now I taste my own tears of misery
Knowing what a fool I am to set you free

But without you I’m really not free
But a prisoner by my own perfidy

They wrote it all down, what I’ve done
Somewhere between clouds and sun


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 Reviews of "They wrote it all down"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2011
Excellent writing my sweet friend....please stay safe and always be you sweet lady...Hugss..remember you are always in my thoughts and my prayers.....ALWAYS
Love,
Chanti Lace


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 18, 2011
Brilliant piece of art with the perfect capture of the picture or perhaps the picture captures so well the words.
fee

Reviewed by YADUVANSHI NEHA
Reviewed on February 18, 2011
well expressed feelings and desires...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
This is yet another of your moving and meaningful writes that expresses feelings with which I can relate, Denise. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
A different kind of pinning for a lost lover, and one that I like for its difference. This showed talent behind the words.

Reviewed on February 17, 2011
and what you have written down
is deeply expressionate
our choices are never as certain
as we sometimes think they will be

New Dreams & Moons Dawning
Victoria


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