The persistance of distance
A contrivance of the alliance
Of allied forces
seek a mass
offensive
Far off somewhere
Some person said he had heard
had been the source of reference
of a noise excited
and a crow ed
and stretch a length further
than a legal meter and
the measured space known exist 'tween
an energetic radiating heat
and the waved undulations
scene between the ears
Was said constituated of
postmaturely neutralizizing
electrochemical energy
and not of the eqilibrating heat radiation
Of the captain of the charge
whose presence had more a strange wavelength
than of the standard six inch violation afore mentioned afixed to the standardized and certified summons
delivered in writing
from the mutual Allies mutual intelligence fund
and prorated
never exceeded
standard distance restriction
on traveling pertubations
An' built
assembled
triggered
a lied-to-release device
for the source of the trouble
Though fooled molded an' modeled
in the exact fooled descriptive name
of things and events
of themselves
woke em all up
in a potential
mistake a'size
a released heat
as the
perspective invading and
referenced trouble
A wrote and a standardized the relation:
length = potential distance of electrochemical energy propogation minus the heat of friction
Thought through carefully
and weighed consisely
in order know the correct place deliver their tricked device
from their Allied Forces
and highly weighted population,
mass arsenal places
If one considers the gravity of the issue, and reflects on the next succeeding relation:
it must be that heat gravitates of a mutual force of itself and electrochemical radiation...of it-self-for what ever did make the Captains' strange wavelength heard further
away as only electrochemical radiation.
Marvin Eli Kirsh
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Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
Your link to "Comples Thinking For You Simple Time," hits the nails on the head for me, although I haven't visited it, just looked at the title, because except for the "Allied Forces" and the "captain in charge" and the "far off somewhere," I have not idea what you are saying, EXCEPT it is quite possible, I mean it is an outside change, it could very well be, that you are speaking of Iraq. Course my simple times may be missing the premise here.
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