Do you see me here today?
For I don’t know where I may
What I know is clear and clean
In her curves I was last seen
Round her curves, moves the universe
Forget Newton, this is new Physics
“A woman is the only best sight”
Hafiz called me from his Deewan last night
He drank her from the Persian wine
I breathe her from the gender sign
Her curves are the poetry of nature
But Psudo-Feminism is a pet-vulture
Without you O woman, the world is dustbin
You had escorted me when I left Heaven
(You won’t escort me now if I ever leave earth
Alas, this is the New Woman’ Birth)
E x c e l l e n t. That sound you hear is applause!! 'Pea' <3 ~~ PS: If you haven't read The Da Vinci Code, do. It is very
relevant. . .understand when you read it. Be well & stay you!!
I LOVE POETRY, IN THIS POETRY MASOOD WRITE:Do you see me here today?
For I don’t know where I may
What I know is clear and clean
In her curves I was last seen
Round her curves, moves the universe
Forget Newton, this is new Physics
“A woman is the only best sight”
WHEN I READ THESE LINES EVRY TIME, I FEELING THAT WOMAN ARE REALY A
ANGEL.
You have some very interesting thoughts and concepts. I really like some of your phraseology. You really took your woman from an angel, out of heaven, and placed her right in the arms of hell, didn't you?
Good write. Thanks.
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2006
Captures women on all levels the ending was outstanding. Thankyou for posting.
"Her curves are the poetry of nature" Now THIS is an inspired line if ever there was!! Absolutely wonderful Masood - you've indeed captured the "feminine mystique"!
I only wish that all men could read and appreciate your words. Women too for that matter.
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relevant. . .understand when you read it. Be well & stay you!!
Abdi-Noor
For I don’t know where I may
What I know is clear and clean
In her curves I was last seen
Round her curves, moves the universe
Forget Newton, this is new Physics
“A woman is the only best sight”
WHEN I READ THESE LINES EVRY TIME, I FEELING THAT WOMAN ARE REALY A
ANGEL.
Good write. Thanks.
I only wish that all men could read and appreciate your words. Women too for that matter.
So good to read you again my friend.
Peace,
~Rose~