Without you/
there is no me/
I am incomplete/
set adrift/
on storm ravaged seas/
please/
take me in your arms/
again/
the place where I breathe/
without you/
there/
is/
no/
me/
without you/
I cease to be
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Reviewed by Robert Harrison (Reader)
Reviewed on December 20, 2013
You are one hell of a poet young lady. The wording is beautifully chosen and set out in meaningful tuneful order.
i look at this two ways. one way is; asa wishes he was the recipient of this kind of love. the other way is; there should be only 'one' recipeint of this kind of love. thanks
A collection of love poetry both relatable and unique.. Poems both joyful, playfu , yearning and romantic. The Poet has exposed his heart and soul in words of love and admiration. Take a journey through the thoughts of a Contempary poet of love. Poet
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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My respect to you and your poems.
most enjoyable read
Peace be with you
William
asa
deep inner feelings, nicely written, more please.
Budd
Ron
Christine