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Dizzy
by Linnea A Larsen → (All Poetry by Linnea A Larsen)
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Dizzy from all this spinning,
In what shape will I be tomorrow?
Submitting, turning, changing,
Transformed by every sorrow.

Fingers that press my flesh so hard
I sob and wail and moan,
Loving hands that love so much
They would never leave me alone.

He shows me what he’s done with me,
The after and the ‘fore,
Delighted, I cry out to him,
“Spin me even more!”

Dizzy from all this spinning,
Too hard, too tough, too real,
But changing towards the beautiful
On this patient potter’s wheel.


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 Reviews of "Dizzy"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 29, 2012
spun to perfection ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 23, 2012
A unique and beautiful love poem that gives me thoughts something not so beautiful underneath. But you have written it so well with the reference to the potter's wheel!

I sense a song somewhere there… Spinning, spinning,… Spinning.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on September 21, 2012
Amen to all that spinning, Linnea (love that name).

"Too hard, too tough, too real,
But changing towards the beautiful
On this patient potter’s wheel."

Yesssssss . . .


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