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A Moon-stained Poem
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Most of my poems are about poetry itself because I am always intrigued by my own writing process!

A MOON-STAINED POEM

The dome of sky has dissolved,
And in the snowstorm's hearse
Dead flowers are being carried
To the dust to meet their curse.

In this hour of melancholy,
On the blanket of darkness,
The moon has slept taking me
In her motherly embrace.

Yet I feel like an orphan,
And seek some solace with a shaking hand,
Oh, how everything has collapsed about me
Like a ruined castle of sand!

All my cries are stonewalled
By the silence so absolute,
Their wounded echoes return to me
To coagulate my tears and make me mute.

The tendrils of vine of darkness
Are surrounding me as if to claim
My tears and sighs and heartbeats
In lieu of a moon-stained poem.

-Portia Burton


 


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 Reviews of "A Moon-stained Poem"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 18, 2013
You are finding a voice in your art. Understanding poetry makes many things possible. Takes y9u many places. Excellent piece. M.True

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on January 24, 2013
interesting write portia...nice flow and great title...enjoyed...pmedlin

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 23, 2013
Your title drew me in, Portia, and this work has a fitting tone and authentic sentiment beautifully aticulated through monochrome overlays of images giving voice to the muffling of that resounding silence. I, too, find the writing process endlessly fascinating and much food for thought. Kate xx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 23, 2013
Reads more like a moon strain poem. You've tended to dwell on the darkness, while the moon provides a certain light.

Ron

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 23, 2013
Portia, your poem flowed nicely from verse to verse leaving much to think about...Nicely done.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on January 23, 2013
Lovely Procession Portia

Coffins & Death Knells
Play Steven Tyler for Me
Vickie

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 23, 2013
there is much to be read here and enjoyed
budd

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 23, 2013
Very well written with many wonderful metaphors


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