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Like a Candle ......
by WILLIAMS MAVELI → (All Poetry by WILLIAMS MAVELI)
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This is a love poem by WILLIAMS GEORGE MAVELI

Like a Candle ......

To say that I love you,

Means that I love your

 Body and mind

Wholeheartedly

I can love one person all time

As my life is just saying

 That one candle will

Continue burning

As long as you live

Along with me

Like a candle,

Enlightening me

Hence, I declare that

Your eyes are dew drops,

Lips like red cherry fruits,

Face is a full moon;

Hairs, black forest,

Dove birds, your tits,

Desert Lake, your navel,

You are my own nature,

So celestial,

So elegant!

__________________________

BY

WILLIAMS GEORGE MAVELI

___________________________


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 Reviews of "Like a Candle ......"
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on February 2, 2015
One point: I would say "breasts," vs. "tits" - the latter is more crude; the former is more classy. I would also say play with various forms; both lyrical and free-form - you can loosen the constraints by reading other poems that are both light and dark in mood; and get some further inspiration. This one feels a bit too constrained instead of all-out passionate.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 2, 2015
I'm sure she will love it. A little too forced to be genuine.

Ron

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on December 31, 2014
12-31-2014:

Body And Mind Are 2 Totally
Different Things...

Love Is Myth
True Love Is Compassion...

TRASK...

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on December 30, 2014
What a beautiful love poem.


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