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Upon Discovering True Love
by Eddie Thompson → (All Poetry by Eddie Thompson)
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(Penned while on a trip with my future wife as I discovered how she was different than all the others before her who had left me hurting and confused in love.)




When I am with you,
Stars don’t shine any brighter;
They shine as they are.
Reality smiles.
I don’t seek escape from life:
Only clarity.
People make mistakes
When they seek relationships
To give them refuge.
A relationship
Should offer understanding:
Never confusion,
Never distortion.
You are not just a life-line
Of desperation
But a ship of truth.
I don’t need distorted views
Of stars, or flowers,
Or birds, or music;
But I seek to know these things
As they truly are:
As they should be known.
Show me a thousand loves lost,
And I’ll discover
Care mistaken for love.
Emotions can be helpful,
Clothed in honesty.
If I seek a star,
Let it shine as it exists:
Not as poets dream.
Our relationship
Is not a refuge for two
But open sharing.
Reality lives!
So I am never confused
When I am with you.


 


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 Reviews of "Upon Discovering True Love"
Reviewed by kia anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
I love this poem. I know exactly how u feel. I feel the exact same way about someone right now. But i was trying to explain the poem to someone else and they were confused or whatever. I was hoping you could email me a clear explanation of the poem that i can show them. Because I'm not to good with words. But its nice i love it.

Reviewed by Marilyn Rice
Reviewed on October 7, 2007
Dear Eddie,
I don't recall ever seeing this particular poem. Thank you for sharing it. I am so glad that you and that beautiful wife of yours know true love and that my husband and I also know true love. So man hearts are broken on the search for someone who can truely love and be loved equally and wholly and for as long as the two shall live. Your friend, Sissy

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
Reviewed on February 7, 2005
Eddie,
Very romantic, but what caught my attention was the deep truths about true love that rings so clear with this writing. Excellent job!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 31, 2005
a wonderful romantic write
on true love

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 15, 2005
Beautifully loving offering, Eddie; a wonderful gift to your wife. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2005
Eddie, this must be read at the wedding, congratulations. Do have heaps of decades of happiness..

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2005
Beautiful simply beautiful and let me know about this company post your answer on my message board.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 14, 2005
Eddie this is so lovely. A wonderful tribute to real love and the lady who brought it to your life. All the best to both of you.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 14, 2005
Bravo! Amen! Now this is love! What a great gift you have to know this. How wonderfully inspired you were to write this with such
a lucid state of understanding, so that we may know it too! Thank you!

Love,Eileen

Reviewed on January 14, 2005
oh, this is sweet! well done, pastor eddie!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on January 14, 2005
sounds like a good start to me...you are right, relationships should never be a way out of something else one isn't happy with, like reality but a way into a better reality


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