(Penned while on a trip with my future wife as I discovered how she was different than all the others before her who had left me hurting and confused in love.)
When I am with you,
Stars don’t shine any brighter; They shine as they are. Reality smiles. I don’t seek escape from life: Only clarity. People make mistakes When they seek relationships To give them refuge. A relationship Should offer understanding: Never confusion, Never distortion. You are not just a life-line Of desperation But a ship of truth. I don’t need distorted views Of stars, or flowers, Or birds, or music; But I seek to know these things As they truly are: As they should be known. Show me a thousand loves lost, And I’ll discover Care mistaken for love. Emotions can be helpful, Clothed in honesty. If I seek a star, Let it shine as it exists: Not as poets dream. Our relationship Is not a refuge for two But open sharing. Reality lives! So I am never confused When I am with you.
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Reviews of "Upon Discovering True Love"
Reviewed by kia anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 9, 2008
I love this poem. I know exactly how u feel. I feel the exact same way about someone right now. But i was trying to explain the poem to someone else and they were confused or whatever. I was hoping you could email me a clear explanation of the poem that i can show them. Because I'm not to good with words. But its nice i love it.
Dear Eddie,
I don't recall ever seeing this particular poem. Thank you for sharing it. I am so glad that you and that beautiful wife of yours know true love and that my husband and I also know true love. So man hearts are broken on the search for someone who can truely love and be loved equally and wholly and for as long as the two shall live. Your friend, Sissy
Bravo! Amen! Now this is love! What a great gift you have to know this. How wonderfully inspired you were to write this with such
a lucid state of understanding, so that we may know it too! Thank you!
sounds like a good start to me...you are right, relationships should never be a way out of something else one isn't happy with, like reality but a way into a better reality
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
I don't recall ever seeing this particular poem. Thank you for sharing it. I am so glad that you and that beautiful wife of yours know true love and that my husband and I also know true love. So man hearts are broken on the search for someone who can truely love and be loved equally and wholly and for as long as the two shall live. Your friend, Sissy
Very romantic, but what caught my attention was the deep truths about true love that rings so clear with this writing. Excellent job!
on true love
William .....Peace & Love
a lucid state of understanding, so that we may know it too! Thank you!
Love,Eileen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D