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Fallen Chair of Devout
by dawn You'll never know → (All Poetry by dawn You'll never know)
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don't ask

 

 

 

 

 

 

Crawling, sprawling on concrete

 

Scrapped, chaffed knees

 

Upon cruel endless street

 

 

 

Thrash! smash reality!

 

Voice, nonsense invade ears

 

Oceans of notions

 

Nails grind, crumbling tears

 

 

 

Smearing Lips, Red

 

Shredding, Worldly Clothes

 

Dirt, where Dirt Should Be

 

Ground upon Black, Molding Tree

 

Sky Shakes, Heavens Roar

 

Rolling Spikes, Bloody Floor 

Rake it in,                                   Dish it Out                   

Fallen Chair of devout      


 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Fallen Chair of Devout"
Reviewed on July 5, 2013
Great insight Bob, thanks!

Dawn

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on July 5, 2013
Sometimes the hour tolls our particular emotion. This is a spur of the moment type of poem with some long term problems chewing around the edges. Feeling bruised and bloody from unvoiced emotions you express them with a series of odd and disturbing images. I did things like this years ago. Back when I thought people cared. The best value for writing styles like this is the ability to voice such startling images, which only strike a chord if the reader has some empathy or comes from a similar state of angst. I do like the images of skys shaking and the heavens roaring figuatively. Bob

Reviewed by Billy Kidd
Reviewed on June 10, 2013
Lot's of nonsense around these days. So, I guess I won't ask.

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on June 6, 2013
Wow!...Lots of emotion! Powerful!


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