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The Unforgiving Sea
by Paul G Day → (All Poetry by Paul G Day)
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A poem about feeling completely lost and hopeless in the face of unforgiving and relentless emotional pain.

 

In the still silence of the deepest night, 
I thought I heard my name. 
But when I searched the darkness, 
no voice there was to ease my shame. 
I returned unto my waiting bed, 
where cold sheets enveloped me 
and there I dreamed I lost my soul, 
when I drowned in the unforgiving sea. 


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 Reviews of "The Unforgiving Sea"
Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on November 22, 2014
...feeling lost and alone...that's the cruel irony,
sometimes all you need is...to be alone...get
a little free space...being yourself...finding your
way...you need to be a little lost first to find
the missing part...you're looking for and grow
beyond it...An inspiring poem!
Thank you Paul, for sharing your writing
and God Bless!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 19, 2014
The poem certainly has a hopelessness about it, most probably caused by the action of the person in emotional pain. I can feel it, and that's all a poet can ask.

Ron

Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on November 18, 2014
I've drowned in the sea that was unforgiving too - and it doesn't seem to want to let me go - but I let it go! Fantastic write here, Paul.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on November 18, 2014
Scary poem. Don't want to loose my soul. Don't want to drown in the sea. But if I had a dream like that I would wonder, "What is this dream telling me?"

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 18, 2014
I had a horrible dream last night myself. They sure can prey on you the next day and even further.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 18, 2014
I think I have drowned in that same sea a time or two myself...-e-


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