Fantastic! Nothing more needs to be said except that I'd love to have you as a member of my website. You'll find a link on my pages.
BTW Dancing with Chameleons is the tentative title of my upcoming book of love poetry.

Profound and well crafted. Liz

Well writ!!

Love Tinka

What you see is not always what you get. Well done!

Thanks,
Dan

very accomplished poem, cedric.

... you, smiling your confident ancestral smile
and me trying not to give the silence words...

You seem like a true lover of poetry to me! warm regards kenny

A very unique ability to twist and manipulate words to frame the picture at hand. Fantastic.....

Be safe,
Karen

Nicely written. Thank you for making my night.

Is it not the chemistry of both that changes us. Lady J

This is indeed substance for thought, Cedric. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

As an actor myself I can almost feel you on the stage enuciating your lines in a dramatic sweep of your hands towards the audience. I like it.

Fee

A gem of a thought process. This poem is quite inviolable in its spiritual undertones me thinks. I'll pass on the performance in only underware though. Sorta reminded me of the Red Hot Chili Peppers some years back, when they performed naked with only a sock over the jewels. YIKES!
Blessings ...
Richard the seeker of semi-precious gems ...

Bravo !!! Bravo!!! I love you as a poet and a human.Jen

I love Ginsberg's poetry, and I love the honesty in this open write: a changeling, you are! Can picture you on stage reading this. What an intriguing image: well done, Cedric.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

A great modern poem. I read a bit about Ginsberg since I have not much knowledge about US poets. Quite contraversial. Victor

Hope they're clean undies!!!!
Simplicity in appearance, but unique poetry in essence...

Blimey Miss, your poetry is outstanding...

If I didn't know better I'd kinda think you n KB were the same person, but 10 000 miles kinda proves that theory wrong..lol

BTW any pics of the recital..lol

stunning conclusion and the subtle play of parentheticals :} must say my favourite line is "pure in their longing to be....pure with[out] dirty hands" egads, the hiddens.ness of what we do trying to put it behind our backs so that no one else recognizes/sees the 'us' of relity. .. ..and its such an honest camouflage, never inteding to hurt, just protect [sometimes even others besides ourselves] such an artist youa re. ..
love the line breaks----
indeed~
ness

Cedric, another literary gem... a linguistic adventure of the most intimate proportions. you are simply amazing.

I once got to see Ginsberg in Sand Francisco reading naked to an audience. What a treat! :o) --Robert

tonight i am Ginsberg
reciting poetry on stage
in my underwear

And you've done it very well - Bravo!

Enjoyed this unique presentation and your play on words along with the arrangement. Cedric~simply wonderful!

Blessings to you and your work,
From the Heart...

Where there is true love there is truth, no time for dirty hands. a beautiful write, thank you for sharing.

Rose

What direction{yes}-love TedsO

Sorry if I can't read this poem in my underwear, but will be looking around to see if I can spot that little chameleon with little clothing on. Broken promises are like broken arrows, useless, and to the exclusivity of Romeo and Juliet I will counter...kiss a frog, cross your fingers and see what happen.
Lovers and Chameleons, aren't they the same thing?
Georg