Inspired by my friends, R&B Pratcher who sent me a pic of The Black Swan Dance. While looking at the pic and listening to Dozie's "Gabriel's Lounge". This is what came to me.
She danced on the floor of water Her feet told a story, Wrapped in love She danced like an angel With swans by her side, synchronously.
The beat led her around the dance floor Her hands were touching souls, Her body held you captive And the rhythm took you away Nature was in awe of her.
Kingdoms bowed Her eyes magnetized, The water followed her shadow Then the rain came Washed everything away.
In place of her dancing Rose a mist, It flowed throughout the land In the distance you can still hear the beat Taking on her personna, the mist danced.
The picture along with the painting are very beautiful.Your pen danced in your hands as your words moved the readers and flow straight into their eyes and hearts with rhythm :-)I love it,take care
This is beautifully written Pier. So magnetically majestic as only The Swan can be. Rhythmic and flowing. You have really been listening to your muse. :P. The flow and metre of this piece puts the reader in the audience watching this majestic dance unfold. Thank you for sharing, this is such a delight to read.
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Wonderful subject, well done!
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Gina
Edwin
Regis
Your poem captures the image with soul and compassion - a superb write!
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Lance
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Leann
A Beautiful write
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William
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Karen
Stay safe...
Keep dancing....
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie