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Shoelaces
by Suzy Davies → (All Poetry by Suzy Davies)
Friday, May 13, 2016    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A philosophical poem for children.

Shoelaces.

Learning to tie shoelaces
was a chore-
and when they came loose
a bit of a bore.
But there was something
they taught me,
when I tied them myself,
independently.

A pair of shoes
helped me get
to the places
I liked,
the people
I met.
But the secret
of tying secure knots
is something
you get through
life, a lot.

Sometimes they unravel
when you don’t want them to,
and leave you with heartache,
and sad, and blue.
And sometimes you untie them, when,
you’re where you belong,
and out of the rain.
Shoelaces make for sure-footed walking
and sometimes our feet
will do the talking.
Copyright Suzy Davies 05/13/2016. All Rights Reserved.No Copying.

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 Reviews of "Shoelaces"
Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 15, 2016
Always intent on perfecting that knot...
And such is life...
Diana...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 14, 2016
Yes, learning things is difficult at first, and if what you have learned comes unraveled, it is doubly difficult to go back and learn it again right.

I don't remember struggling to tie my shoe laces. But perhaps I did and that's why I always go back and retry when things get unraveled. And, there are times when I know I'll never become a shoelacer and pursue other avenues. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Dadfire
Reviewed on May 14, 2016
Suzy, great analogy. I am afraid many go through life never getting their shoelaces tied, always loose, undone dragging along on the ground. I have those days. I guess that is why I love my Crocs, just slip em on and go, but you have to keep an eye on them as the soles wear out quickly and one can slip very easily and boy have I slipped a time or two.
Maybe I should just go bare foot, ha!
Dan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 13, 2016
Taking shoelaces to the next level and comparing them with human emotions is very creative.


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