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The Old Trestle
by Michelle Close Mills → (All Poetry by Michelle Close Mills)
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A haunting place...


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Stretching beyond

the river beneath,

is a rusting hulk of a trestle

that once proudly bore

the immense, the mighty

locomotives of iron…

With their belching black smoke,

and their sharp piercing screams,

they pulled box cars along

narrow skeletal tracks

which was all that had kept

the tonnage of train

from the craggy abyss below.

Proud evidence of

a time long ago

when railroads began to move west.

They tore impractical paths

through byzantine wood,

rigid foothills of rock,

and erected steel hands

to bridge raging streams.

Now lonely, futile,

the crumbling trestle

no longer sees

locomotives of iron,

with belching black smoke.

But if we will give pause,

it is possible to hear

the horsepower quicken,

as the ground starts to quake,

while the echoes of ghosts rumble by.

 

 

Michelle Close Mills ©


 


 
 
 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "The Old Trestle"
Reviewed by Robert Harrison (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2006
A beautiful picture that set the poem upon a firm foundation.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
W o n d e r f u l images, w o n d e r f u l poem. Like so many people, I find bridges fascinating, and trains even more so.
B R A V A !!!! 'Pea'xoX

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Great poem! The imagery and descriptions are perfect. You are a very talented poet. Thank you for sharing your view of the world and for opening your poetic soul to us.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on October 17, 2006
You've painted pictures with your verse of an era long gone...Well done....M

Reviewed on October 16, 2006
Reminded me of some scary tracks we used to cross in TN on our way to fishing. Great imagery

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
One very fine offering Michelle!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
Very fine write. You bring back the ghostly images very well.

Rusty

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
(Clapping) This is wonderful, Michelle -- the imagery is flawless. One can almost hear the train roaring, smell the belching smoke as you've written. Again, a wonderful poem and I applaud you.
Much respect for your talent.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by C. J. Stevens
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
A haunting poem that brings back that excitement and magic of the train - that late giant of travel. A fine and nostalgic flight. Thank you!
CJ

Reviewed on October 15, 2006
Amazing as always Michelle, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
This brought back so many memories. My dad and uncles were all railroad men, so us kids were all kind of familiar with tresles and such...
Great imagery, flow and rhythm in this piece, Michelle.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
This is my kind of story, Michelle, because I love trains. The old locomotives were a machine like nothing the world had ever known and feeling the deep rumble, as the train would go past, was pure excitement for me as a child. I was fascinated by the wigwags, those round disks with the red light in the center that would swing back and forth at crossings. When I was about three, when someone would ask me what I wanted to be when I grew up, I would say, "I want to be the man who wigs the wigwags." This is a wonderful poem and as you can see, you sparked memories of my childhood that I had long forgotten.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
The graphic compliments the images you painted that echo with the rails of yesteryear. Up here when they pulled up most of the old rail lines they converted them into hiking and outdoor sport trails, even four wheeler trails and people got to see sights that most had even known existed. Well done on this piece.

Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
Photo and verses very effectively complement one another, Michelle. I find the trestle so symbolic somehow, meaningful of more than the obvious. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
The photograph is stunning and the poem so vividly completes the picture. Ed and I recently went to stay in a little cabin in the middle of the giant Redwood forest and took a steam train up the mountain. It was an old locomotive like the one you describe on a single track wooden trestle track. I literally had tears of wonderment running down my cheeks. Your poem brought it all back for me. Wonderful wonderful write!
Much love Chanti

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on October 15, 2006
Awesome write Michelle!
BRAVA!

Reviewed on October 15, 2006
What a spectacular picture!!! I could almost name this picture; "Destiny" - Yup! That's what it appeals to me.

Wonderful write as well! I enjoyed both!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)


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