So many wonderful lines! Love the hypnotic effect you have woven into the poem, Muhammad. The images, and the passion! Thank you for posting this. C r e a t i n g . it! <3 Phyllis <3
Taken together with CYPRUS, this poem, CYPRUS 2, marks quite a special event in modern letters. The layered metaphors steeped in a consciousness devoted to the divine and a life welded to the dictates of time and history constitute their own small miracle of linguistics. The fact that such spiritual ecstasy has come through a heart and soul that, in this world of increasing dis-ease and violence, could have denied its faith as easily as it embraced it, is no small matter at all. In CYPRUS 2 we have an amazing addition to the treasury of world literature and, if one may dare to say such a thing in 2005, a mesmerizing contribution to the luminous poetry of the mystics.
You are lucky, bro. Stephanie is not exactly profuse in her leaving of reviews. She's a sweetie though so you should be thankful. Thank you, Mahdi. Love and peace.
Regis
Reviewed by S H (Reader)
Reviewed on August 8, 2005
Well well, another beautifully written one. This one has sexy moments throughout it oddly then travels back into the verse so soft only like an immortal poet could do. I bet you're remembered. I don't say that to everyone.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Sandie Angel :o)
Regis